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"I love you but I'm scared to hurt you" The red eyed vampire shouted.
"You don't have to be scared, I know you'll never hurt me..please"
Annabelle tried to hug him but he shifted away quickly. Soon tears built up in her ocean blue eyes.
"I'm ugly right? that's why you don't even want to look at me..I hate you!" She started walking away when strong arms pulled her closer.
"You can insult me all you like but I won't bear it if you hate me" "But-" Anna was cut short with a kiss.
"MhMhmm" A moan escaped from her lips. "Do you still hate me?" Andrien smirked.
"Only a little bit. But I know what can fade that away"
"Pls, tell me" He breathed on her ear.
"I would prefer to show you" Andrien smiled exposing his elongated white fangs and they began their normal routine.
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They say a Vampire and a Werewolf are deadly enemies. What happens if they mate?
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Viết đánh giáThe story's been brilliant so far, good world building and nice pacing to it. The updates are also nice. Keep up the good work author! keep up the good work
hi dear....the book concept is quite interesting and your writing skill made it alive to imagine. The characters are intriguing and well-designed. The world background leaves you awestruck...the more I read it more I like it... great job and good read dear..
The character and plot description is seriously very good. You gonna love it seriously. I'm hoping that you can carry out your efforts. There is some mistakes but author is constantly improving it. LOVE IT
Nice work! I must say it's interesting and engaging from the start. Couldn't put it down, read all chapters until stumbled on the " To be continued" page. Waiting for more. Update it soon pls.
I liked the world background and how the story is progressing, the author has done a great job in the turns of events, and best of luck to the author for writing further, and don't get disheartened, your story is good, I hope you keep writing ^-^.
I think it's very good 😊. The chapters are short but interesting, and since it's chapter 15 I think it's perfect time to add the review. So , I'd say the world background is kinda idk? like realistic fiction? but other than that I like the whole story line. Looking forward to more chapters 😊
Pretty fun read so far, I love the world mainly but the characters have also been pretty decent along with everything else so far in my opinion. Keep up the great work!
Dear author, I wish you let me know sooner about this genre because this is exactly my number 1 genre! I love your storyline & I wish you the best for completing the story! This is my favourite so far! [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I love the story. Its gradual build-up is fantastic and the way the story is developing shows its potential. There is no doubt that with the direction of the story, there is more to enjoy!
A vampire story always makes me curious, I really like it, Andrien and Annabelle. I feel that I was watching movie when I read this, amazing. 👍👍
Great world building. I can already tell this story will stray from the classic vampire stories. I would really recommend it. I can't wait to read more.
Nice novel. Overall enjoying the reading~ Still, I would like to see more inner thoughts to understand the main characters better, not a script that tells me what someone is feeling but >why< he's feeling. Continue your great work!:)
Am tired of vampire stories already but your synopsis lured me in. Am definitely reading this Great beginning and all [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story title is enough to make me want to read it. I definitely see a lot of potential inside of this story and hope to see more from you!
The Story has much potential inside of it, I seen minor mistakes that can be improved on in the future, so definitely keep up the great work! I can’t wait for more.
I am going too put this in my read list and see where we can go from here but super excited to get inspiration from fellow authors 😗😗
I read your book to date, which is 23 chapters. Before my review, I request that you stop leaving advertising comments on gift comments of other author’s chapters. It is rude and annoying. It is not a practice done by good authors. Review: Your storyline is new compared with the many books I have read. However, it lacks in maturity. The sentences are often “choppy” and do not flow well. The story is rushed, so you don’t get a feel for the surroundings. The first chapters representing 7+ years reads more like a synopsis. Take your time to develop the story. You want to create a book that draws people back to it and entices readers to not only come back, but pay coins and drop gifts. At present, as an experienced reader of many books, this will not be a book I keep in my bookshelf.
Tác giả ItsEllie
Hi guys! it's the author of 'Married to a ruthless vampire'. I'd really be happy if you share, read, comment or vote if possible. I'm going to be updating and editing my story so I'll need your full time support. Thanks 🤍