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Did I cherish life? That was the single thought inside Christian's mind as he laid down on the floor bleeding out.
While falling to his demise in the void, a random voice asked him a question. With the system's help, he escaped the cold hands of death and started a new adventure in the empire, Bloodstar.
"What is this Ultimate Nightclub system?"
"WHAT, A PHEONIX AS A PET?"
With the task of running the only place for entertainment.
With a bird on his shoulder and a glass of bourbon in hand.
His Nightclub's rise has only just begun.
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yoyoyoyo. I like the way that he dies is from his insane girlfriend, im wondering how this might affect his personality since he was probably in an abusive relationship. When it says that Christian is told what the System is, its probably best for us to learn that along with him, maybe throwing out some of those key premises of the world we're going to be exploring as a hook. I'm curious whether or not the System is an afterlife or not and whether other people end up going there after death, but you could use Christian being given this info, as a way of telling us this aswell. I really do think that the premise has great potential of becoming a really cool story and hope you continue to write this. I'm excited about the world-building that you will expand on in future and hope that we run into a whole cast of interesting characters along the way. [img=recommend]
will you update this again? its a good story for a start hope you'll keep this story going. hakshe dkdndidnehsbdjs dkaubeoanudbsidbr skshwmkz