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It was really cuteeeeeee Imma use a lot of my stones to vote for this it was just so good!!!! I hope people enjoy this like me and this author to write more!!!!! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
This story is sooo good!!👍🏻❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
it's so great to see this because it has a great story line ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
The fanfic has a very good storyline. The story had a good base it begin which itself is its biggest strength. It just added to the quality of the writing The characters sketch is on par with the storyline. I would like to suggest the author to focus at bit more on the emotions of the all characters both good and bad. It would add a realistic touch to the story. Also try to bring up other characters more often with the main ones. I was able to read the story without being distracted at any point. I should admit that I'm hooked to the fanfic, now I am waiting to get the next update. Overall I liked the story for it's quality of writing and and glad I read this .
woahhh! this is so good! you're thee best author for me! i can't wait for more chapters and stories to release author-nim!! i'm going to wait!!♡