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Step into the mystical realm of Revara alongside Viru, thrust into a world of magic and mystery. With the power to command a living dungeon, Viru faces a thrilling path ahead. As he gathers extraordinary allies with powers beyond imagination, they forge a dungeon that beckons challengers from all corners. Prepare for an exhilarating journey as Viru rises, confronts, and conquers in the relentless pursuit of glory. In a world where every step is a heartbeat away from danger, Revara's secrets unravel, and Viru's destiny unfolds in a tale that will grip you until the final, heart-pounding moment.
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Hey guys! It’s the author :) please leave comments as you read so that I know where improve and tweak things. Thanks!
okay, so first things first, it's an alright concept, if you like the tags then the story will be up your alley. part of the problem is that the writing is weird, not bad, just weird. like it feels like an AI wrote parts of it, goes on and on about things, often saying the same thing 4 times in the same chapter, just rearranging the words a bit. and then it will go on to reiterate the same thing in the next chapter.it wastes alot of time explaining things in this same exhaustive way, instead of telling the story.it honestly feels like the author had an AI Generate entire chapters almost. and yet at other times there are typos and stuff on occasion that make me wonder if an AI was involved at all and the Author just doesnt understand that too many Flowery Adjectives will only devalue them and make them as commonplace(and worthless) as pennies
I love how the story progresses, i would love to see more of it. i think the author has just started to develop the characters. it's looking great for now. if the phase is unchanged in the future. this novel is going to be excellent.