Multiversal Struggle

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Noble_K1ng

Bro you jeprodised the time line so much that it doesn’t make sense anymore

LV 14

Argent_Evergarden1

HONEST REVIEW! This fic is horrible The fight scenes are decent but the plot is all over the place The author made the mc op yet decided to not only make other op OC’S but also give everyone and there mother a boost in power to the point where he never really has an advantage. The mc contradicts himself so much that it feels stupid. An example, Would be when he fights the admirals at marine ford at say’s he is going to kill them yet all of them live All marines seem to have a huge boost in power that makes no sense New water logia is suddenly a thing and given to a marine Vegapunk makes a bunch of new DF and somehow every marine seems to have awakened there fruit The system the mc has is horrible. At some points it seems to help the mc at another it seems to completely disregard him. Author lets mc make changes to the timeline yet FATE somehow makes plot corrections Mc seems to want to take Robin and Nami from Luffy’s crew(although robin isn’t in it) yet he still helps Luffy. One moment mc wants ace to die yet still saves him Author introduced so many oc women to be with the mc that there is no character development They see the mc and instantly think “oh he is cute, maybe he can help me achieve my goal” and then follow him. I Havnt read it yet but it seems mc is going to danmachi after one piece yet he is WAAAY to strong for danmachi but whatever. Overall I like a op mc and wish fulfillment story but this makes 0 sense.

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Kazvx

Put more Chapter ++++++

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RAYMEL

It's not bad I get the character is all over the place and you may need to cut out fate but other than that I like that you are doing Haki and Magic.

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shaluxifa

i skipped to danmach arc and i got to say u made me laght first time readding this put a heram tag and u will probly get more vewies btw just from watching u i think i will make another novel and make my mc shameless