Monarch of the Darkness

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Elesmere

Hello, I'm the author of this series and I must let all of you readers know that I wrote this story as a hobby. This story was the embodiment of myself traveling through a new world and I can only write this when I am relaxed. I will update around 2-3 chapters every week. I know it is not a lot, but believe me. I am pursuing quality rather than quantity. Questions and comments are welcome, but please use appropriate language. I hope that all of you enjoy the story. Thanks for diving inside Continent of creation and accompanying Hayden throughout his journey :)

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Chinnu_002

The world background the author creates is really clear and the writing quality is brilliant..I have read the initial chapters and I can say that it's a book worth my time and yours... keep updating 💚

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Daoist_Storm

the world background has potential but the story development is wack and the MC, in fact its only because he has the darkness arte that i gave the character design 1 star. how an the mc who just woke up an found himself in another body in another world just start being friendly with every 1 around him? like he woke up in the body of the second prince which means the original host is died.if this comment section had audio i will tell you off for destroying the this potentially amazing story idea via the MC

The author has put a very interesting story inside and really loves the description of the world. A lovely novel to read if you like such of. fantasy stories.

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ObsidianOrbs

The author has done a great job with the description of the world and how it works. The explanation of the world's power was easy to understand. The scenes transition neatly and has a nice flow to it. Good job Author. Keep updating!

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Archwriter

Well, If as a reviewer, I'm quite stingy but this novel is very interesting. The characters are uniquely designed and the world background is amazing. I like the concept of Arte as creative writing is what I think is best. And yes, the writing quality us also good [Just the chapters edited earlier or it will be a hassale later]. The story thus far has piqued my interest... Overall, a 4.6 star review for the Monarch of the Darkness.

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GloriouslyFamous

The story is an enjoyable read; it has a nice flow. The world and the system of power are described comprehensively and it is easy to follow. The story has brought the different aspects of a good novel together. It is a delightful read.. try it :)

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minho_Shiny

The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios and gave a wonderful knowledge on the world background.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.keep up the good work dear author

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Gourmet_DAO

I read 8 chapters at a time. Read was interesting! The text block is written wonderfully, there are intriguing points. The world is fully revealed. But the character is not completely clear what he thinks about, what emotions accompany him, his inner world, his philosophy ?! Well, probably this is only chapter 8, we learn about his world from other chapters. So this is not a problem. I liked that his magical skills are well and clearly described. Of the existing shortcomings, if it can be called such, I would call the actions of the main character not entirely clear. Not quite realistic. And some cliché with the analogy of cultivating the eastern DAO and its transfer to the European way (the world is certainly magical, your world, but the techniques are very similar to the methods of cultivators of the DAO). And I really liked the novel, it’s interesting to read it, I added it to my library. I look forward to your update and new chapters! I wanted to find out from the author how many chapters he plans to write in this novel and how often is he going to update? Thank you it was very interesting to read!

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Sally112425

Though I have read just a handful of chapters. I want Everyone to know that this novel has the potential. It will grasp your emotions correctly. Keep updating author

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red_grapes

Done reading! I liked the World Background. I also liked the idea of "Arte". Writing quality is good, but could be better. I was a little confused when Hayden suddenly knew some skills during the fight with the bald guy, he doesn't remember any memories that time, right? All in all, it's a good read. Best of luck, author!

LV 4

LinShui

This story, 'Monarch of Darkness' has quite an intriguing plot. So far, we have seen how Hayden has adapted to his surroundings, gained some skills and how he utilises them in battle. I personally like how the asian cultivation theme is westernised in this novel, it gives it a touch of something new and makes it more surprising and unpredictable for the reader. The story itself is well paced and has a nice flow to it. Although, with a little editing and proofreading, the story could be even more immersive and seamless to the reader. The characters are shown well, but I personally would love more description on the surroundings and the world, since it is a new world for both us the readers and the main character as well. All in all, the story and the plot has promise, it has an interesting premise and the author explains quite fluidly how everything works during the first few chapters. I'm curious how the characters will evolve as the story progresses. Keep up the good job, author! :D