Modern Family: The boy who Reincarnated

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Ifyld

I just find how the MC is being around alex a little creepy, he just made friends with her and suddenly he wants to court her. I understand that the authors reasoning to get them together faster so the MC can be more involved with the plot but cant there be another way. As the author said, he wants the story to be as realistic as possible but i really don't think this is very realistic. I remember seeing a comment where there should at least be a month long timeskip so they have more time to develop feelings. It is very unlikely for a person and someone as smart as alex to fall for someone in less than a month. Evem if the MC has a very very high IQ, the most he can do is to manipulate some events so him and alex spend more time together but i don't think thats enough to fall for someone. Also why does he want to drive so soon, he is 11, and again the author wants this novel to be as realistic as possible so how is this realistic. I will also borrow a point made by someone in a paragraph comment about how the richest family in the world(Rothschilds), dont use their money to bribe for stuff like this and i am more or less sure that they have drivers and body guards instead so they can be safe. I hope the author can improve in making the chemistry of Logan and Alex so the story will be smoother in terms of believability/realism. Like what the Rob said, there are not a lot of OC modern family fanfics that has a good plot, so if the novel is not good enough for readers to enjoy, whats the point of making it. Good Luck

LV 13

Slxxpy

Cringe dialogue.

LV 13

Insert_Here

I have not even read it yet but since it is modern family it automatically gets 5 stars. please do not drop this author [img=update][img=update][img=update]

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MMMCMXCIX3999

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome

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AStrAl_Soul

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LV 4

Anthony_Marte

This story is decent but it would be so much better if u had decent grammar it severel makes it hard to enjoy with how bad it sometimes get.

LV 6

Phoenix1998

Nice. Modern family is one of my favourite sitcoms. so i am excited for this fic. Nice. Modern family is one of my favourite sitcoms. so i am excited for this fic.

LV 13

UwuCreyo

wonder full! awesome! lovely! and here I am giving you a 5 star as of now the novel is perfect for me nothing to change. keep up the good work

LV 14

yokedjaguar

Honestly, it's the English and the conversations that ruin the story. Also, the authors "Genius" character. The biggest problem with genius characters are the authors themselves can't match up. So just ask for something else. That way, you can blame it on character development.

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donut_obsessed

dude it's been 3 months...have you dropped this fanfic????

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chokenuts39

I hear by proclaim this fanfiction dead. This is for new readers so you dont get invested in the story. Think of this as a deterence. Will remove when author decides to update.

LV 13

Shikaku_sama

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IINeeRoII

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Kazvx

Put more Chapter ++++++

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Elon_Husk

please do not drop i love it iits change of pace from the usual is Isekai plot i wish there are more of these please please please DO NOT DROP

LV 13

Immortal_Cat

This is the first time i've heard of modern family, so i do not have the knowledge of how accurate this is. But i love it and i didn't saw any errors that i know. Highly recommended.

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Pizza_banane

i love modern family so 5 stars ......................................................................................................................

LV 13

Nieub

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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G_7_T

Excellent story so far. Keep it up. Ignore the trolls and focus on your writing and updating the chapters regularly. Need little bit more improvement in main character background and keep updating it regularly, That'all.

LV 3

mudbloodmk12

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