MHA: Sovereign of shadows

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LuckyDemi

This is my first fanfic, I won’t give 5 stars, because you can always write better :), although it’s too early for a full review, but I’ll state my assumptions. Regardless, I plan to write the fanfic to completion. Choosing just one system for leveling up alone is a rather controversial issue, because even if you impose a lot of restrictions, the main character will still be quite strong. But for me this is a good experience that I will take into account in the future. Thanks to everyone who reads, ready to read recommendations for my work.

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SHADILLAC09

This story has a great concept but there are a few things that make it hard to sit and enjoy this story. I have read all the chapters that are currently out(ch. 23) so here are my thoughts so far. 1 - The story is written like the author's first language is not English. There are so many references that are made that just dont make sense in English at all. It was normal in the beginning but as the story goes on the author includes more and more of these references which takes some mental gymnastics to understand. 2 - The MC is boring and annoying. There are literal WHOLE chapters of the MC just rambling on and on in his head. He does this while overexplaining the simplest of things and it is soooooo boring to read. The MC had character and personality when he was in the power selection space, but when he reincarnates he becomes a robot. He doesnt talk to anyone and just spends his days over explaining his decisions in his head. I understand if he is antisocial but that is not really addressed. He just acts like a terminator robot the. 3 - This is one just my own personal annoyance. But I hate it when in fan-fics the MC always states they dont want to change canon. It is so dumb. You are a new character that was thrown into this world. You have already changed canon so why dont you just do what you want?? All in all, I think the author should get some help with the English translations and add just a little more personality to the MC. Hopefully, without the endless inner dialogues about random topics.

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Jose_Nicolas_Mejia

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Mamdouh_mohamed

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TheSpiritOfWater

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