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"Humanity is often seen as a symbol of kindness and compassion, a reflection of our higher ideals. But the truth? Humanity is a mask. Beneath it, there’s hypocrisy, manipulation, and self-interest. People wear the term ‘humanity’ as if it absolves them of their flaws, but in reality, it’s nothing more than a convenient label. You can act in the name of kindness, but deep down, everyone is driven by their own desires, their own flaws. That’s the nature of humanity—an endless contradiction."
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plz read till ch 3 and 4 because that where i started using grammar checker plz
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Viết đánh giáI can't give a review just after 3rd chapter. But hmmm good enough. Dunno how is it now. will review again after 20+ chapters[img=golden ticket]
I wrote an old review this is the new one after finishing all the chaps he has so far TLDR: 3/5 author has potential he just needs practice and I think he could cook given time WQ: 2/5 it gets better after chapter 2 but still not good overall its eh would recommend getting an editor or just someone who speaks fluent English to go over it and give notes. SD: 3/5 it's alright but it's not fluid and i got confused and lost during g some chapters, and the way he ordered the chaps is straight dog water he should've got rid of the work count actually write to hit the req. amount and move the q&a chap to aux CD:3/5 can't say too much since there isn't enough and the first 2 chaps are unreadable still (hoping that gets fixed soon) US: 4/5 not too many chaps so 4/5 until there's a set schedule or I can get a good idea of when they like to drop WB: 3/5 hasn't given much background you gotta know bare minimum at least the premise of mha before getting into it overall:3/5 good idea poor execution but author has potential they need to figure out their writing style their flow. I will update this review 1 more times if author continues to update once at the 20 chapter mark and if good enough one at 50.
I marked the writing quality as 1 star and the rest as 3 stars if any were wondering. Anyway, I haven't honestly read it (got through 1 and a half chapters with 6 out) and I'm most likely never going to if it doesn't get a whole rewrite, purely for grammar and the quality of the writing. Now, I know the author mentioned English isn't their first language, but damn, at least run it through Grammarly because it has honestly made my facial expressions change multiple times from one paragraph. From what I can tell, the idea is interesting and there's most definitely an idea for the story, but like I said, the grammar is just too confusing. I really recommend you (the author) to at least try and use Grammarly to have the bare minimum. I wouldn't recommend just blindly accepting everything Grammarly corrects though, that is if you do try and use it. You won't learn much if you do that... anywho, good luck with the story and life and yeah lol.
Tác giả RuberX
sshhhhhhhh you didn't see a thing -------- english is not my first language