MHA: A Cat's Story

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Master4thWall

Yo! Chart— Writing: 4.0 Story: 4.5 Characters: 4.6 Update: (Not sure yet, but since the author posted 6 chapters on the first day, so this is good in my book!) World Background: 4.6 Before you ask, "Wait, the novel just came out, why is this guy already giving out ratings like that?" I would like to add that I am one of the lucky people who was granted the chance to read up to chapter 20 by the generous author! I am not really a critique, but I would say this is a good novel. The start was a tad bit confusing (for me), but that feeling soon disappeared as the story progressed. While the author is new, he is passionate about what he is doing. A slight heads up (spoiler): The start would be a little slow, but it picks up the pace. And finally, MC HAS YORUICHI POWERS!!!

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hejaiizjcf

"I love Doggo's big booty, but not his cliffs ! thx for the chapter 👍" - Wolfstar14

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WolfStar14

Ahem I'm just here to shamelessly simp for a rabbit girl ..................................................................................

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NewManagement

Author hosed up third chapter by nerfing mc instead of just letting him have powers that were scaled to world. Gods hosed mc over bu wasting his wishes.

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DaoistyQNGiX

Inverse Yoruichi so he has a womans voice in his cat form and he isnt able to turn into a human and in all honesty he is an idiot lol dude doesnt bother to look theough her memories and he only does after he realizes that his voice was that of a womans. No idea how this story is high rated when so far its not good with a dumb and NERFED mc so yeah. Hoping this isnt a trap mc

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Kutu

An assassin or evil mc's whole point is that they are forces of evil that let go of their moral compass and advance towards their future unhindered by everything that made them chained. The author made his MC an assassin mc, I really felt that he was an assassin due to his calm and rational persona, until "Character Development" came along, Author made him attached to people, the same guy that was taught from a young age that you can't trust anyone but yourself trusting others? Author, this was pretty disappointing...Good Luck in your Fanfiction.

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HIKARU_GENJI

I am personally a fan of MHA and I like the fact that this fic began way before canon. It allows so many possible changes. As long as the author don't give up I am sure the story will be great. As of now though the story is slowly settling the base. We get to know the mc His personality and his power. I am really happy about the fact that he won't suddenly become super OP. I was a little worried because bleach and MHA simply shouldn't be compared. You have city level in MHA. Meanwhile you have multi planetary in bleach and some people who can wreck dimensions. So yeah. 😂😂😂 Thankfully the author is simply a fan of Yoruichi and took some inspiration from her power. For those who may worries. There's no gender bender and mc is a man.

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always_tired_

Alright, I just read it all in one go. Not an expert at writing reviews so I will keep it short and simple. We get to see some backstory of the main character before he is reincarnated. it can be a good thing or not a good thing depending on the situation but I'd say it's on the good side here. it gives a better grasp of the main character's background. The way to give him Yoru's powers is also quite reasonable in my opinion, very interesting and funny. As for writing and grammar, it is pretty good, much better than a lot of things on this site. You won't be finding any obvious errors that make the reading experience less satisfactory. All in all, it is quite enjoyable and a fun read. Recommended to give it at least a try. Ah yes, there is another incentive to read — the "gathering of women as partners" and the "*content* related to the gathering". Personally, I'm not quite fond of them but many people like them. (please forgive me for my choice of words as Webnovel, for some reason, does not allow me the liberty to even use the proper terms.)

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Darth_Kitsune

An amazing fic with big potential and knowing author its gonna be very very good. ...................................................................

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JustApervert

its definitely a five star for me just from the premise hope its continue like this, keep up the good work ...................................................................

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Kamesaiyan

Its still too early to tell if this fanfic is good or not but as of right now I like the premise. I’m looking to see more of this, Keep up the Good work!

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HeartRend

What can I saw... it's Okay I guess? The story really seems to lose focus, and spends a lot of time on the youth of the "cat"/boy. Literally by the latest chapter (35), the Mc is still a kid, and acting like a kid as well. The story has become full of fluff and character interactions with the plot taking a back seat. The MC is basically interacting with and getting close to, who will most probably be one of his future partners. However, remember that he is still only in elementary school! I just feel the story would benefit with more focus on the plot and the story moving forward instead of a buch of fluffy slice-of-life chapters.

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KingOfDragon

Es muy bueno, mucha originalidad, ocupando un tema que talvez ante se han escuchado pero este es por mucho mas original. Espero la actualización lo mas pronto posible y la velocidad en la que desarrolla es buena. QUE DURE MUCHO ESTO.

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Suicide_Maniac

It's quite good, an interesting concept using Yoruichi's powers in MHA world, definitely worth your attention at the very least. Writing quality is also pretty good so should definitely give it a try.

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Lasagnaaa

I like this. mc is basically a Yoruichi. I like that. nice relationships. grammar is good. so is the plot. author expands on the Canon, making it not boring .

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Daimon_Voldigod

I'm a simple man, I see harem, I add, I see them cheeks, I add. has all my fav tags, looking forward to reading it. now let's fecking GOOOOOO!!!

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Lucy_Carla

mmm... i like how he write world background and the explanation............. ............ .................................. ............

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RasenganMaster

The best fanfic of mha i love it! Thanks for the great work autor-san! Dont give up this amazing fanfic. ...... ........... ....................

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Hhhj

Very great potential, I hope the author will continue to delight with chapters. Really liked the idea to take time before the main story.[img=update][img=update]