/ Kỳ huyễn / Merciless Dragon Knight
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[Vol.1 - How I Became a Dragon Knight]
The world went into chaos, and the VRMMORPG game I used to play 'Great Genesis' turned into reality.
I, Kim Hajun with my girlfriend, Park Yun Hee are in the middle of that chaos.
I swear to myself that I will sacrifice everything and anything for our own sake.
[Vol.2 - Am I Still Human?]
I'm confused about myself having evolved into a half-dragon race, I'm confused about whether my identity as a human still exists or not
I behaved strangely due to the influence of my race turning into a half-dragon and I even made a deal with an existence that called itself The Supreme Ruler.
Can I get through this situation?
[Vol.3 - Looking for a Way Home]
After remembering all the things he went through up to the time he was stabbed by Ginselda, Kim Hajun lost his consciousness.
Kim Hajun woke up and he was in a place he knew very well, the place where he spent his time, Great Genesis.
He's really confused about what happened to him, but he really wants to find his way home so he can meet Yun Hee.
However, many obstacles await him.
Can he meet Yun Hee again?
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#Disclaimer:
1. Everything in this book is fictional and not intended to be satirical, demeaning, defamatory, etc.
2. The artwork does not belong to me and if anyone knows the artists of this work, please let me know and I will credit them.
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#Note: I expect constructive criticism and suggestions because I want to be a better author.
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Released on: 09.52 AM (GMT + 07.00) April 12, 2022
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Viết đánh giáEnglish is not my native language, so.. something like grammatical errors and such is something normal in this book. (You can tell me which part to fix, so I can immediately fix it.) For update stability, I'm a student in high school and currently have a lot of homework, so I can't give regular update schedule for now. About this book going premium, I'm sorry that I don't know if I can delay it.
A great storyline, to be honest, I really loved reading this book & the characters were amazing I loved each character please edit some chapters but this is great work author I highly recommend your work great job just fix the mistakes but it's a great book, I highly recommend this book...
5/5 I felt like watching a hit korean drama while reading. The author has outdone themself. This is an awesome masterpiece. You should give it a read or you will miss out on a page turner book. Kudos to the author. *cheers
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
This novel has a quiet chiché premise but the plot development just sucks you in the World as you read how the Main Characters act and what their actions lead to. The main problem of this Novel is the weak premise. The messanger of the Supreme stuff was not nessary according to me. You could have just transferred the people into the destination while all the introduction and stuff should've been left for the System. But anyway, This Novel is very interesting and will definitely recommend to read it. It is worth your time. Btw, author, I advise you to use the system more compared to the messangers. Also, the FL also kinda feels out of place. I feel she is too cowardly...
Tiết lộ SpoilerA story with good form, I actually have rather high expectations for this novel, and the video games' section can get fascinating, most especially where the viewers comment. It has a nice premise, some things do need changing, but the issue is rather insignificant. I look forward to reading more of this.
This book is really intresting! I love the premise of game into reality! Furthermore a mc with an intresting background is always appreciated. I hope to see where this book goes!
This book is absolutely amazing, the vivid characters and crazy attention to detail never fail to impress. Read this book! Then, give this book power stones, then give this book a gift (when you can) the author totally deserves it!
Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP. Too long, didn't read, 5 stars, BLEEP.
Sorry for the basic question, but is it harem or nah? -------------------------‐-----------------------------------------------------------> very long rocket ship
When I read the first chapter, the description really helped me imagine the scene easily since I'm a very imaginative person. One thing I'm going to point out is there are some repetitive words but I guess, it's acceptable. What I can say is that, your book is interesting indeed :)
I kinda like the story even though it use first person POV, and the chapters is already locked at chp 19, the part that I like is the description part, it's kinda detailed imo
I'm not sure what to type, but I want to ask first, did you dropped your other books to focus on this one? I'm also confused as to what you mean by started SSS-Class Beast Tamer from chp 1 again :( Well.. Then, here my honest review for this book. Actually there is a lot of grammatical errors and you repeated something like you dealt damage, you received damage, etc. Idk what to say, but I enjoyed the flow of the story, and I won't ask about your update stability, it's kinda randomly imo
Tiết lộ Spoilerloved it! the story is very smooth and very creative. I love most books written in this point of view and this is definitely one of those books.
I tried to reach out personally as you requested this review, but it seems I can no longer do that. I think what really brought this review down for me was the writing quality. Present/Past/Future tenses are almost always completely messed up. I had trouble looking over a lot of grammar and sentence structure mistakes as well. My first impression of this work was the opener felt bland and did not catch my interest. The action of the game felt lacking and you kept repeating I chanted to activate this spell. I think it would be simpler to just have the system say [spell] activated and go into the description of the spell as it is happening to the MC. It was all of these inconsistencies that made it difficult to immerse myself into the action as a reader. I also wrote down the dialogue between the MC and his girlfriend felt like they were both barely fluent in English. I really wanted to not struggle with these above points, but unfortunately we are on an English platform and these are the basics of the basics. I hope to see updated versions of your work in the future.
Tác giả SIENDONIA
Greetings. Ladies and gentlemen who read this book. This is my second review after I finished writing the second volume of this book. Overall, volumes one and two of this book were meant for the prologue, but I didn't expect them to be too long and boring. Each chapter also has too many screen messages and thoughts from Kim Hajun himself. Maybe some of you stopped reading this book because the storyline is a bit inconsequential and absurd, therefore I apologize to you because this is my first book. What's more, the grammar, spelling, and word choice of this book are completely ruined. I was able to fix a bit of some part thanks to someone's help, but I guess it's still lacking. So, I apologize for this one too. So, why do I give this review 5 stars? It's because I was told to be more confident in myself. Kekeke...