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Memories Past
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Himeko, pregnant, on the run from her yakuza husband, lost her memories in a questionable car accident. Fast Forward 5 years later when she has moved on with her life and put her unknown past behind her, her past comes knocking. Hard. What will a cornered mother do to save her son from her past?
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I really like this story. It captures your attention when you first begin it. The only thing is the chapters are pretty short, maybe you should try to lengthen them or combine them. Also you don't go into detail about the surroundings. There just isn't that much details, but oddly enough it works with your style of writing. Also it is 12 chapters in and we still haven't met the ML... I thought this was a romance?
This is a interesting story I wish chapters were longer I can tell that this is your first time writing something like this. Its ok relax the story will come. Try to put your chapters together