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Megaverse traveler (Deleted)
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Brother deleted the novel so it got canceled, read my new novel "Chillin' in an Omniverse"
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The idea is interesting and the quantity of updates is good but the grammar, oh god the grammar, so many spelling mistakes that could have been fixed by simply going over the text with grammarly before uploading it. Development wise, we get to see what would happen if a Sasuke wanna be became Naruto, so much edge!
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Читаешь это и думаешь автор пишет фанфик для дебилов наверное. 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
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brilliantly written love the story 👋👋👋pls read my novel too I've just started writing as I am participating in the WSA awards Novel Name :- The Broken Strings Of Fate pls support me🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
parece interesante le voy a leer ,,,,,,,,,zzz,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,, ,,,. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,, ,,,,Z,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Good story .Like the concept.Your English is good at least better than me when writting😂😂......,................... Don't drop it in the midway
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dommage d'avoir supprimer, c'etait pas mauvais du tout, et l'histoire avec ten ten :'( je veux les relire coucher ensemble sniff. merci pour ces moments sympa
I don't know what people say, I like this story because it can be said that Naruto's character is somewhat in line with what I want, such as punching Sakura or hating Hiruzen.
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DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS FIC!!!! OR ILL RAGE THE NINE HEAVEN'S!!!!!!!!!!!...................... ...... ....... ........ But seriously don't drop this fic
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why did you delete pls upload [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]😭😭😭😭😭😭
this is just a disaster.👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎🤲👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎