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Andy Westeros traveled through the Marvel World before WW2.
Fortunately he awakened his Golden Finger that can make him have the power to protect himself.
Having the ability to create a Symbiotes without weakness of sound wave and fire.
Swallowing all types of metal to strengthens it defense.
Devouring all types of weapon and technology to manifest it as equipment.
Parasitizing Heroes and Villains to copy their talents and abilities.
(The main world is Marvel Cinematic Universe x X-Men Cinematic Universe)
(WARNING: THIS FANFIC WILL HAVE A MASSIVE HAREM)
(NOTE: Altough I could change the earlier chapters to become readable with the help of A.I. However, I will not do it since some of the comments will disappear.)
(I will be posting this fanfic on RoyalRoad. com)
(English is not my native language so do not expect me to write a complicated english and will only use simple word, and this is my first time writing novel)
(This is my own novel, not a translated chinese fanfic novel)
(My english is really just broken to the core because of too much reading MTL chinese novel for years)
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If my review seems a little harsh it's because of the writing quality. it's just slightly above Chinese. WQ: As I said above, barley better than a Chinese Novel, if the writing was just better then it would be an amazing novel. SD: Good nothing to complain. CD: It's alright but only 3 stars as the writing quality kind of ruins it. US: Fine, I only give 5 star update stability to at least once per day updates. WB: One of the best parts, the author seems to know a lot about Marvel.
Ngl this book is my cup of tea.... we have a chill and relax MC here. Although the writing quality is MTL quality, but the story is still good..... Author knows the MCU very well and the story is going logically, though MC is a bit OP but hey, this the reason why we read fanfic because we don't want any type of struggle. I only hope that this book would have 1000 chapters.
This has left me so confused and so many of my braincells died in the process that I can't even comprehend what happened. Writing Quality: 3/5 It's barely better than a super poorly translated MTL. The whole thing feels so Chinese that I can't even get past a single line. I honestly am being overly generous with 3/5. Story development: 3/5 Now here, maybe I'm being harsh. Because the story development is not to my liking tbh and people might accuse me of being biased. But tbh I could care less. I simply can't find any logical flow in the development. Things just happen and everything is solved by symbiotes even before it started. Decisions make no sense when some characters are being evil for the sake of being evil when there really isn't a need to in the first place. But it's the author's choice. so, I won't complain much. Character design: 2.5/5 I honestly should give a 2 here. Every chapter I'm like why TF is the MC doing that. It's not like there's some super ultra hidden scheme I'm missing out on. No, in the end symbiotes will solve everything. And every one will be saying 'yes' to MC. So, all the hassle seems time waste to me. Updating is quite regular I guess. so 5/5. World background is 50/50. Wouldn't recommend to any native english speakers or if their English is good. Because honestly it is painful. Would encourage the author to work on his/her English because tbh the story isn't that bad. Main problem is, many details are getting glossed over because of this machine translation like writing style and we're only left with the barebones. This story feels like a skeleton with good structure but no body or soul.
So far I love the story, we have here an author with knowledge of Marvel comics and Marvel MCU, it is satisfying to see the plot move forward intelligently and logically (Marvel logic) 10/10
Honestly it was good till he just starts being evil sake up being evil. Gets mind control powers with symbiot and juet uses it. Cant read after that. Just easy lazy mode for author
Tiết lộ SpoilerBueno espero que continúes la historia y no la abandones, me gustó bastante la historia.......... De aquí en adelante solo escribiré cosas para rellenar......
Good! please update more, please update more, please update more, please update more, please update more, please update more, please update more!
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This is one of the most phenomenal & engaging Marvel fanfic, please don't drop this and make sure to finish it. The plots are very engaging, and rivalry between H.C & Hydra is perfect, but please make worthy adversaries for MC too, don't make him too op beyond reason.
This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...This novel is good..Need more chapter pls...
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After 27 chapter, this novel is great, it is entertaining, MC just chill and relax . MC does have dumb moments sometimes but over all his IQ is above average, I prefer this than some MC who try to act edgy and smart just to end up embarrass themselves . Author already said that he is not that good at writing english so why keep complain about the grammar, if you have a problem with it than you should leave the moment you see it. In first 27 chapter, everyone act kinda in character to me, so I DONT KNOW how a reader say every character are dumb. I can really feel the effort author put into this novel. It might not be the best but far from being worst