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Follow the journey of Adam, a reincarnator in the Marvel Universe, tasked with the goal of creating as many spells as he could before being enlisted in a war even bigger than the Marvel Multiverse itself. However, will the Marvel Universe make it easy for him to grow stronger peacefully, or will he experience the full Marvel experience? What secret is hidden in his new body, of which he has no memory of its creator, and why is he hunted by monsters nearly every night?
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!!!!!!!WARNING!!!!!
I PLACED A LOT OF LIMITATIONS, NOT TO THE POINT WHERE IT TAKES THE FUN OUT OF IT, BUT LIMITATIONS THAT WILL HELP GROW AS A MAGE, SO IF YOU LIKE EASILY OBTAINED POWERS, THIS ISN'T FOR YOU. THIS IS A STORY ABOUT A CHARACTER TRYING HIS BEST TO CREATE SPELLS, SO HE WILL TRY TO LEARN, READ, AND MEDITATE. SOMETIMES IT WILL FEEL BORING.
IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR AN OP MC WHO DOESN'T LOSE, THEN THIS ISN'T FOR YOU. HE WILL GET HIS ASS BEAT, GET HIS BONES BROKEN, HE WILL GET HIS ASS HANDED TO HIM (REASONABLY).
THIS ISN'T HAREM; THE FEMALE LEAD IS MAGIK OR ILLYANA RASPUTIN.
I ALSO PLAN TO WRITE 500 CHAPTERS, AND NO, I AM DROPPING IT
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Viết đánh giáAimless and confusing. After reading over 47 chapters I can say that this novel is not good. First of all, there is no aim or objectives, there is no rhyme or reason for whatever actions the MC does. He's almost a soulless husk derived of a power hungry OP wish-fulfilling protagonist. Yes, we are told in the synopsis that the MC is a slow burn, that he gets strong slowly, that he's not OP.... In the early chapters he can spam a mana bomba capable of killing enemies that Wanda and other sorcerer's were having trouble with. Adam (MC) has a system that allows him to cultivate points to be stronger, whenever he reaches a milestone he's able to make a new spell,... Now, this has 0 impact at all. It is the center of the novel, it is the "thing", but it may as well doesn't exist, because the novel it's written in such a way that it is meaningless as MC always wins and has always the answer for everything. Now, I said before that he seems a soulless husk, he never interacts with anyone or if he does (which is implied) is never written. All that its written is: Adam woke up, trained, fought, Adam woke up, trained, fought - ad infinitum. reading this felt like a slog, there's no substance, no charm, it almost feels like one of those auto clicker games that you get bored in an hour. Not recommended.
I don’t feel the integrity of your story, each chapter looks torn and disconnected from the previous one. correct this shortcoming and send him on a long quest, otherwise superficial periodic skirmishes with local bigwigs do not cause a wow effect. and I like that you don’t push your character to the forefront of the whole world by making him non-violent and popular from the very beginning. Я исправлю обзор когда почувствую улучшения
I like the different take on a marvel fanfic, it’s much more unique than the massive amounts of MCU stories and Spiderman stories and the fact it is more supernatural based than superpower based is really cool especially since it’s not the normal go learn from the sanctum stuff.
Tác giả Bulale_Abali
An interesting take with a lot of potential. I would love to see where the story leads to 15 chapters from now.