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What started as a simple bounty hunter job quickly turns into a violent feud against a rising force in GGO. What started with a partnership grew into something more under the hail of bombs and bullets. OC X Sinon.
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Viết đánh giáVery good, interaction and details are wonderful and written professionally ، and I hope it continues with this great quality. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have absolutely no idea how this isn't getting the attention it deserves. It is well written and way better than some fanfics that I have read before. Anyways give this a chance, it is one of the better fanfics I've read on this website.
The story is great. The relationship between the mc and Simon isn’t being rushed and is currently being developed. The updates are regular and very cool. The writing is good from what I have read. Very cool, not google translated so yeah. World background hasn’t been explored as much, however, it has been explored enough for the plot. Characters are cool and have personality. Very cool. Overall, story is very cool, better than a lot of the recently released fanfics on this site.
35 chapters in and we know absolutely nothing about the mc, not even a name or description of his looks. MC feels threatened from just a few words in ch 26, and throughout the novel he is constantly blushing and stuttering around girls, which isn't normal no matter how Japanese protagonists make you think that it is. 4.4 stars because everything is good except mc, which can be fixed with character development. This ended up being more of a complaint about the mc than a review, sorry about that.
Tác giả lazY_b0nes
Pretty good so far, nice dynamics between the mc and Sinon who's probably one of the most underrated SAO waifu. I'll be looking out for more in the future.