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After the dark timeline, rudeus magic to go back in time failed his soul merged with our mc's soul .
Now follow his journey as he tries to do new things with all the knowledge he welds and see what he does. Is he going to do the same thing, or will he do other things that change his life.
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This is going to be my first time writing something properly, so please support me, guys. All the suggestions will be appreciated, and I hope you guys will like it.
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An exceptional story, the protagonist is intelligent and thoughtful, has a good foundation and is pleasant to read, success and triumphs. Good good and thanks.
I mean if you're just following the original plot then what's the point of this, I mean just read the original this is just a knock off version that follows the original with some extra and not so important monologue.
If you wanna read another fanfic that just follows same canon mushoku tensei plot with half the chapters being nonsense and pointless monologues then this fanfic is definitely for you!! Enjoy
Not bad. Though so far at the time of this post. Mc has followed the plot down to a T and its almost the same as the novel except for a few differences, its like watching a recap. Make chapters longer too and separate dialog. Personally i wanna know what you will do about the teleport incident. Will you allow it to happen or you mc will at least do something about it. Pls do explain a bit more what curse(buff) he got that he can now use battle aura. If you can, show NEW and ORIGINAL things. Such as POV of Roxy after meet MC and then another pov of what she is doing.... i also suggest you do a pov of hitogami to tell us if he noticed anything and then add POV of the hârêm girls once in a while. Then there is lemons once mc is older cause he is... 7 Now.