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Life In Extended Twilight (Dropped)
3.74 (61 số lượng người đọc)
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Guy is thrown into Twilight but has no clue how he got there it was no wishes or meeting anyone but how come he still has a power.
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This was kind of boring in the beginning until you went to school and now the story is going to be butcher by harem tag like all the other fanfics that never finish because they added to much women like your collecting Pokémon cards.
Generic rosalie cliche garbage alice is the best girl . 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
MC tells secrets when the character's relationships are barely built or explored. MC tells secrets when the character's relationships are barely built or explored.
what the hell man its all about cliche scene where his heart skipped a beat and she blushed or what ever its boringnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Story is inconsistent author goes from NO HAREM to, not a single girl will be left out. certain characters are incapable of certain actions but Then go agead and do that eXact thIng the very next chapter. GreaT grammar, terrible story. bad plot, if there even is one. horrible Execution. spineless
if you want a fic where the mc tell all his secrets to others then this is the one you are looking for if you want a fic where the mc tell all his secrets to others then this is the one you are looking for if you want a fic where the mc tell all his secrets to others then this is the one you are looking for
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It's a fun novel to read and the romance element is done properly and is a cross-over of twilight and harry potter author and with the mc that has solo-leveling powers along with his own dungeon. I don't think i need to say anything else.
For the first , i quite like that MC have a power like in Solo Leveling , makes him unique , even after introduce its Xover between Potterverse and Twilight its has Potential but the author start to tell everyone about his secret ?! well that just make the speciality that MC have lost , well that it for me , bye
with all respect to the author this story has too many loop holes get your concept about twilight right before writting a fanfiction i.e vampires don't sleep in the real books/movie
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This fic is completely wrong, a vampire can't blush at twilight they are pale to shit where their blushes come from, the power scales are totally messed up, the Mc got the system since childhood and is not much better than his parents who by the way are magicians and they are not outstanding or something to write home about, relationships and blind trust in days or 1 week this sucks
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changed my mind to read because I saw that the author does not care about his readers (he does not answer questions).........................................
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Gonna give a quick honest review of this one, Comencemos. Writing Quality: Average, I don't see many typos but there are very few dialogues, a lot of words in every paragraph, make it a little loaded and not a fresh reading experience. Stability of Updates: Can't really tell since I haven't even caught up yet, but almost there, however, I'm betting on 4 stars with this one. Story Development: Lackluster, don't really see much development in be it power, romance or any other area, I will explain further below. World Background: Decent, I can't really give a detailed score regarding this one because I've never seen or read Twilight but I bet the official ones' background should be better than this one, further explanation below. Now I'll explain why this novel is 'average' to me. First, I don't know anything about twilight and I almost never read any fanfic that has less than 40 or 50 chapters in this site but this is the first Twilight one I've actually seen in the rankings and gave it a try thinking 'maybe this one will give me a better impression of the story than what I have heard from the original' Well... I'm totally disappointed at the fact that I see almost no influence of 'Twilight' in this fanfic except for a few characters and that's it, I mean it has only been 19 chapters, 15 for me, and yet there is a total lack of any major event in the series or anything that might actually give characters or even the MC a purpose. The only good thing I can say thus far is that I love Alice and I don't know if I should attribute that to the original Twilight or to you author. I think she would've done a better heroine than Rosalie and mind me I don't hate Rosalie, it is just my opinion, her character just has more 'personality' than Rosalie's Second, you mixed Solo Leveling's power but failed to understand what actually makes Solo Leveling amazing which is not just the necromancer like power but the actual battles and the brutality of MC actually leading all his freaking 'diverse' entourage into epic battles. I've yet to see the first thrilling battle here. I don't really like the desition of MC involving his family, can't really understand people's fixation with immortality and living forever with the same person, he and Rosalie don't have a choice but why involve his parents? Immortality is a curse, not a blessing. His parents have a very peaceful life not being involved with the magic world after escaping, why would you involve them in all that mess again? for the sake of what? I don't really see the point in them battling any enemy if there was really one when he has his GF/Wife with him and a possible legion of shadows as well... And last, I see you have the intention of making it a Harem, a small harem... I don't hate harems, I actually love them but I hate harems where the girls in it aren't properly developed. And let me tell you even if this was not a harem Rosalie wasn't properly developed. There weren't really moments, battles, strifes, discussions, etc etc... That made me think 'I like this Rosalie' if this was some other author I'd think that poor Jasper is going to get a Green Hat. That's a mistake a lot of authors commit, and that's the reason you yourself are thinking of involving another girl in this. For there to be only one heroine, the romance must be developed slowly but not in a physical way but in an emotional way. You could even make a Heroine and an MC that fk each other on a daily basis three times a day but don't have feelings for each other, and slowly make them develop those feelings and that would be a fairly good romance to write, the opposite is also true. But in this case, I only see a guy that fell for some girl he has only known for a week without any reason whatsoever and a girl who fell for a guy at first sight also without any reason. As for the world background, I don't political, geographic, weather or any other background points of view taken into consideration a lot in the writing. For this and many other reasons, in my humble opinion, this fanfic is just 'average' but being in its early stages I believe it can still be redirected to a proper place. I like the idea a lot that's what drew me here. I was thinking of something like this when I came: "Fking Jing woo summoning hundreds of monsters to fight a war against an alliance of werewolves and vampires after freaking stealing the Werewolf Queen and the Vampire Queen from their Kings, everything unleashed in an Epic Battle where he fought those two kings alone, his two queens fought the generals and his undead army fought the mobs..." Alas, that's more Underworld than Twilight but well one can dream. Hopefully someone reads this and makes a fanfic like that. Greetings.