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Last Fortress of Humanity
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When the Crack of Elon appeared in numerous location in Earth, monsters started to pour into the world crowded with humans. Under the attack from the monsters from the Crack of Elon, humanity perished.
Against the monsters that come in different shape, sizes, and intelligence, humanity fall. They sent explosive, tanks, jet fighters, and even nuclear missiles against their opponents, but nothing works.
In the end, only a primitive weapon like sword and spear works against them. But that was too late. The remaining survivors escaped. Remain on the run, they move from one continent to another, witnessing the changes brought by the monsters from Crack of Elon.
Unknown of how long has passed, humanity stands on their two feet once more. They constructed the Dominus Fortress, the last stronghold for humanity in an attempt to retaliate and retook the right to rule over the New Earth.
The story begins with Technos, the main protagonist that born with the lowest social status inside of the Dominus Fortress. To survive and climb up the ladder of upper society, Technos first needed to make sure he obtained the lowest qualification before starting to dream.
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And out of all possible luck, he found a lost technology that was meant to give humanity a chance to retaliates. But the issue is, Although that amazing technology work miraculously, seven hundred years still passed. How can it be possible for someone with no Ancient Language Proficiency learn how to utilize this lost technology instead?
[Author's Note]
This piece of a novel is my first attempt to see how good I fare in the Monster Hunting Writing Prompts. Hopefully, the quality of my story is satisfactory and enjoyable for my readers.
If you feel that it worth your time, please spam me with your comments, support, and critics, and if it doesn't, you may bash me or anything.
Thank you again!
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The world background is good, the reasoning and explanations about the species,currency and politics is good, even the usage of materials from beast and plants author give a pretty good explanation.
I'm not really fan of apocalypse and modern novel because of the interaction of between countries and sometimes their decisions and leaders decision is not really have a good explanation(it become bias) , even sometimes author include the real conflict to his novel. About this novel! Great start about intruducing the world background, naming the species and the purpose of materials from the beast, author really put an effort about that. The characters development is great too.
I can't say anything regarding the writing of the story, both the english and the story are excellent with an interesting development of the novel with its characters and world. I hope for a good continuation of the story.
My mind just exploded! Omg! Let me commend you for every chapter that you bring us to dimensions we never knew existed. You did a great job! 😊
give more chapters or i delete review chapters are long very long very good i like what i dont like is i need to write 140 characters 140 characters
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Post Apocalypse, cheat like equipment Nice character building, good world background and story. Good potential novel here, need faster update. 17 years above intrik of love. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍