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4.6 (12 số lượng người đọc)
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Futanari with a system watch as she becomes more and more powerful as the story goes on and watch as she gets more and more knowledge
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Viết đánh giáThis is as Gay as I want it to be which means pretty gay but not get all girls being gay gay. - - - - - - - -- -- - - - - - - - - - -- - - - - - - - -
It's a good story. Each character has its different personality mainly the main character as the harem is provided ends up being curious to find out who will continue with it Especially now that she is going to school it will be difficult for them to meet.The chapters have a well done writing I hope to continue reading this book because it is very good especially now that it will have more action because it will enter a special school
The story is a bit fast paced and the grammar could use some work but otherwise it is good. 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
A nice webnovel. Some grammar errors here and there and maybe a few weird punctuation signs. The story, although simple, is interesting enough but there are some pacing issues, sometimes it feels like the story is just being told rapidly, however there also is not much wait between the good parts. The characters are a bit of a mix, the latter chaps and characters are a bit better but, the group of friends in particular, dont really feel like they are different people with different personalities, they feel a bit like they are just an entity for the mc to talk with and have no purpose and goals of their own. The world is also a bit confusing but pretty interesting in setting, but the way the power is being told feels like it will end with a couple of wuxia novels errors in power creep and confusing power levels. Even though I pointed these errors, the story is pretty interesting and the mc is still likeable and the se scenes are still nice if a tad on the short side.
This is a really good novel that has really peaked my interest and I can’t Put it down. I hope you keep going with the story it’s really great one I have recommended it to a few people and they love it so far. i’m definitely going to keep adding stones to this one.
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This a nice novel. More Chapters.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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by no means your novel is bad. its good to a certain extend, but it seems the writter is still on him/her **** or maybe not yet matured. the converstaion and interaction between character seems too straight foward to me. like , its practically impossible for an underworld family head to straight up explain their background to their daughter friend that they barely know for 48 hours and explain about having *** and stuff. it just, childish if i may say. but, the theme of the story itself is intresting. and the last problems. the usage of ( , ? . ) sign on the paragraph. it was really confusing but still readable. at least for me. So, good luck.
Tác giả Sebastiean
Hello there Sebastiean. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.