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Chương 1: The beginning

in a room a women with a golden hair and eye was given birth

women: ahhhh... it.... hurts

a doctor: hold on madam it well be over soon.

says the doctor while he was worrying

few minutes later

doctor: its a twin.

a big burden was lifted from his shoulder

suddenly the door was open a middle age man with a blue hair and red eyes walks to the room with a mix of happiness and worry

man: how are you wife.

says the man with a worry face

women: I'm..alright.. husband.. where is my children? i want to see.. them.

says with a pain expressions

doctor: here madam its a boy and a girl

women: my children.

said the women with a smile

the children were crying out in their mother nestle

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4 years in the future

a boy with a golden hair and a red eye his name was Gil

he was sitting in a grass and thinking about the upcoming awaking of the talent.

he hear a footsteps coming toward his site

a girl with blue hair and eyes and a face that could rival the moon her name was Elizabeth

Elizabeth: little brother what's wrong.

says the girl with worried face

Gil:sis I'm worried about the upcoming awaking of the talent i don't know if my talent is good and what if it was trash one.

Elizabeth: don't worry lil brother it will be fine. and you were always a talented young boy you were able to walk when you were 4 month and speak it 8 month i wasn't able to do that in tell i was 2 years old.

Elizabeth said to encourage her brother

Gil: i hope so but i don't know why i have a bad feeling about it


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Hi again how was the chapter i hope it was good and please tell me how to improve my skills in everything next chapter well be in the next day hopefully + the name of the main character give a way to his power

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