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It Started with Slime
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First off let me say that I have seen some stories here that don't have great English, that is totally fine, however if it something that bothers you I can assure that I am a native English speaker and therefore my writing in English will be of that standard. With that said there are some great writers here and if English is not your first language you are still doing great!
An alchemical experiment gone wrong results in our MC - It does have a name now but that would be a spoiler... This story follows a Slime that surprisingly has some level of consciousness and there is more to it than meets the eye. Slime is just the beginning of course as it struggles to improve itself and works hard to grow and become strong just to suvive its harsh new reality. There is a lot more going on under the surface than meets the eye and only time will tell if your MC is strong enough to make it through and come out stronger on the other side.
This is story with a Monster Protaganist, I am not going to be using any profanity nor include any sexual content, there will be violence and fighting description. If you are not seeing updates on this story for a while it is not that I have stopped writing, you can read more on the various platforms where this book is available, including Royalroad, Neovel and Wattpad! Thanks so much!
Cover by: Faren
Discord: https://discord.gg/eDuZaEAAqG
This story is published and available on Royalroad, Webnovel, ScribbleHub, Wattpad, Neovel, Novel Online, Booknet and extra chapters on Patreon!
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The book was doing so well with the character development and everything but the recent chapters aren't good in comparison to how the book started. When Resh got his memory back, the change in character was too abrupt but understandable. But what is this sudden realisation and system messages of starting a new life. This is ridiculous. If you wanted to change the thought process of the character just do so with logic and good plot. But don't just bring those cliches of system giving them a notification about some random skills to start a new life. And change in mentality doesn't happen just because of few random system notifications. Seriously? I was expecting a lot from you, since I liked the book was progressing but seeing how the mc is behaving.... And the recent blunder of sleeping on a gryphon knowing very well that the humans were riding it a moment ago. Our very human mc goes straight on top of that animal without any regard for his tiny self that can be obliterated with a single scratch of the animal. Okay, I can understand that this is a mythical creature so he got excited and all and can somewhat be understandable. But that wasn't all the mc did. He fn slept on the creature. When I read it, it sounded so ridiculous. I moment I read it I knew where this story was going. He will be found by the humans who rode the gryphons, and some new story will start. :) . Even his earlier not so aware slime self which didn't have much brain power could process what should be done and what will bring danger. I just can't get it what the writer is thinking making such abrupt change in character and such disregard for life. 99% of the recent chapters are about him contemplating life and talking about this is gross or that is gross and about skill descriptions. I had so high expectations when I first started, now I am just disappointed.
Author here with a shameless review but also! Writing speed is slow I know but more chapters are available on other platforms as well! Royalroad, Webnovel of course, Wattpad, Neovel and Patreon!
this is honestly one of the best webnovels I have ever read, it seems as though the author poured their very lifeblood into it, thank you
Love the book one of the few devour and evolve novels I've read on any platform it has a great plot with amazing development of the main characters abilities