India: On a Quest to Make India Great Again

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Akash_Nath_4791

All in all I can say it's a good story... But it's a little too rushed at this speed even 50 chapters may not be completed and the mc will take his last breath... Although I'm a Bangali also but you were a little too pro-hindu which may cause disturbances in the future plot soo a mutual cultural exchange & development is needed... Overall very good novel... 👍

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brook_y

He will be a great example by creating his harem Ddd

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DaoistArun

Though it is short, it is a very good wish fulfillment story for every Indian. I am very proud to see our online literature booming. I wish many such indian novels continue to come out. I wish all such authors my best wishes. I prefer 'reborn as kings' types but only 2 such novels have been written and that too in vijaynagara empire, so I encourage writers to imagine and create these types of novels. Plus I think Ramayana and Mahavarata can also be adapted into novels and 'reborn' into these to spread our hindu religious ideas similar to Chinese and their prehistoric civilisation, we can also build this different world from our myths. Maybe even spiritual recovery, apocalypse, smut and other types.

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Sherlock1108

This story is going great and I find it fun and intresting to read, personally I feel the story is a bit rushed, if you csn please kind of elaborate things and take it a bit slow, so that we can really immerse into the story rather then just feel like reading a rushed story, apart from the pace everything is really awesome keep going, hope you continue uploading.

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Harsh_Kuwar_1567

Very good book. Try to write something similar.

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DaoistN7aq2f

The best novel I believe I have ever read based on what India could have been. Even though it’s a short story, it effectively highlights most of the major changes that could have taken place that would have changed the current geopolitical landscape of India. Some mi or changes have also been introduced and all over it’s one of the best stories on the past India I have ever read. Though, some of the changes were completely impossible to have taken place as they were introduced however, the author is only a human and couldn’t have nitpicked every detail.

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myDivine

thanks for completing it. ........................ 🔥

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Bibek_Mgr7171

Excellent work snssmmsjsnbsbsbsbdbbdbdbdbbdbdbfbfjfjfjjrkwlallwlwkwjjwjejhdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbbdbrbrbrbbrbrbrbrbbrbrbrbrbbrbrbrbrbrbhrjwkwlowpwoirurjsjnxncbdnnalakrjueituueoqppqlalmxnbvcxhsjwjuriowpqlakkdhbxbxnmdmw

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Bhagwotay

this is good but it's starting episode just rush

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_just_passing_by_

this is such a great story, the first few chapters will bore you but trust me it will get super good. author pls don't stop posting this wonderful work