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In One Piece, with a Mythical Zoan fruit...
3.05 (11 số lượng người đọc)
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In a world filled with endless seas and mysterious islands, our hero, Kai, finds himself standing on a sun-kissed beach. The Grand Line, with its countless tales of pirates, treasures, and incredible adventures, stretches out before him.
Kai scratches his head. "This... isn't my world," he thinks. Back home, 'One Piece' was a story, a manga. Here? It's reality.
But there's something else. A power surges within him, unfamiliar yet incredible. The "Human-Human Fruit: Model Hanuman." He had read about devil fruits, but experiencing one? That's a whole different adventure.
Now, Kai's got two things to figure out. How to use this amazing power and how to navigate through the twists and turns of the Grand Line. With friends to meet, battles to fight, and secrets to uncover, his journey has just begun.
Join Kai as he sails the seas, discovers his new strength, and dives into a world where every day is a wild, action-packed adventure.
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no creativity, characters are pretty much dead, too short, almost no conversations = AI content (Chat GPT). use your own effort to make a story, those AI cannot help you make even half decent story, why go the easy and unrewarding way? wreck your brain for ideas, write them down and try stitch them to make a proper plot and start writing from there. decide how your character look and he's personality, try using your own effort, you may fail once, twice,... but you will learn and improve, eventually you will be able to write something that can satisfy YOU, don't try to satisfy others, write what YOU like.
Say hello to the one who...""Hello!!""Are we going to review this?""Yes, we are!!""Can we just give it 5-star and left?""No!!""But we just did...""Hahahaha!!""
Hey i am rating it 5 star now its your turn to review my fanfic and be sure to give it 5 star as well (btw love your fic keep it up)😁😁
Love the story so far ☕🗿Writing quality is solid and the story itself isn't too original but Kai's character is alright but i'd love some more character developement goingEither way....
SHAMELESS AUTHOR REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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why do i get the feeling of chat gpt.More i read more i find writing style similar to chat gpt. Sorry if i guessed wrong.
The fic feels rushed. A lot of details are missing. There is barely any conversation. There were mentions of chatgpt in comments and I do believe it might be true because the whole experience felt robotic.