In Fairy Tail with Djinn Equipment(RE)

LV 5

Yuri_is_Ntr

Well,you wanna review,you get it.Incredible good concept and idea.Like for real. Writing-even if i can understand,he/she dispelled so many times,that it's become wierd. Characters-Woah,this sh*t hit the fan.You create problem for mc,on all line.Like you hate him.Yandere is fun,but maybe,you can stop bulling mc a bit.He is like a b*tch for all woman,even got r*ped,yeah very funny. And of course,our brave hero,who always suffer,like a immovable rock,that never learn and only whine,yeah thanks again. It's really hard to read,and yeah no character development,I don't even know,if it would be. Conclusion-Good story,good idea,don't wanna to read,because it's really hard to understand how this degenerate of beta mc,struglle like b*tch from all woman. I feel like it's just a satire,but with a great concept.So actually,it's better will be without harem or woman in general.Even though,I actually like harem story.

LV 11

Rildec

Hrmmm, fairytail fanfic, but most of the story has taken place in the naruto world??? Also why is mc such a pushover? And dense? Its unreal how stupidly dense he is. As a king why does he let the girls walk all over him?? I understand the generic girl beats up guy trope, but this yandere stuff makes him look like such a beta Male. Especially when people talk down about his talent.

LV 6

Big_brother_coming

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LV 4

RaulXD

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LV 5

Endless_Clouds

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LV 4

Zygon

Author why did you drop marvel emperor I really like that one,if you are going to 100% drop can you tell me it’s still in my library. ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ......... ........

LV 6

Big_brother_coming

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LV 2

LongTianYun

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LV 5

soke

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