So far I have read all of the available chapters and I think this story has amazing potential, the only reason I don't give it a 5 out of 5 is the ENGLISH IS BAD.
I am not a native English speaker so I also make plenty of mistakes and understand the pain.
I believe you should download Grammarly or another spelling correction app.
keep in mind that it isn't perfect but it could help you A LOT.
I'm not trying to brag or to shame you or anything like that, I hope you take my constructive criticism and use it to get better and improve your writing skills.
I'll keep your novel in mind and keep reading to hopefully encourage you.
Good luck Fellow beginning Author!
TL:DR: Good with a lot of potentials. bud bad spelling.
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So far I have read all of the available chapters and I think this story has amazing potential, the only reason I don't give it a 5 out of 5 is the ENGLISH IS BAD. I am not a native English speaker so I also make plenty of mistakes and understand the pain. I believe you should download Grammarly or another spelling correction app. keep in mind that it isn't perfect but it could help you A LOT. I'm not trying to brag or to shame you or anything like that, I hope you take my constructive criticism and use it to get better and improve your writing skills. I'll keep your novel in mind and keep reading to hopefully encourage you. Good luck Fellow beginning Author! TL:DR: Good with a lot of potentials. bud bad spelling. [img=recommend] [img=recommend]