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In another world with my... Oh wait this is Naruto
3.85 (23 số lượng người đọc)
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Well, this sucks. I woke up this morning to go to the job that I hate at an ungodly hour in the morning and what's the first thing I see when I walk out my front door? A FREAKING truck speeding towards me.
So yeah, that's why I'm currently speaking to a goddess who says she is going to reincarnate me with wishes into a world of my choosing.
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forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks forced marriage sucks
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
Beta(Stupid/Retard) MC he gets Two techniques of both Yin & Yang. By mastering Yin Technique Uchiha can awaken Rennegan. and by mastering Yang technique Senju can awaken Wood release. This stupid guy(MC) gives away techniques like candy. Fûck and there is an uzumaki women to whom MC gives Techniques and she ended up being Hokage's spy. Reading up to that point I feel like I'm burning by Brain Cells.
The MC is giving his clan jutsus left and right to anyone who ask for it, the MC is a ****1ng b1tch to the hokage I mean he(hokage) ask the MC to share his clan jutsus to another village that's just like a hyuuga taking his eye out to give it to a kumo nin, a uchiha giving away their eyes, an akimichi giving their Yang jutsus to the Iwa, and what does the MC say? NOTHING he just go and obeys like a b1tch that wants to please his master and the author said that the MC just want the village hidden in the leaf to be strong when it still has ****1ng MINATO, KUSHINA, TSUNADE, FUGAKU AND THE ENTIRE UCHIHA AND UZUMAKI CLAN!!!
is not that novel is bad it's me who don't like the plot so 1 star😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
Potential is all I have to say! I mean besides the master/servant relationship but then again that kind of relationship isn’t easily to write without making some parts cringe or making it rom com. Keep up the good work author!
First, this is a good fanfiction about a guy isekai into a body with Kaguya and hyuuga bloodline(A 7year old kid actually), where he is orphan for a good reason and journey to Konoha while collecting subordinate. It's a good idea for Naruto fanfiction, with good command of English,symbols, space, build up, plot, character and paragraph. I can definitely say that while it's not the best fanfiction, it definitely good enough for me and my standard is average, meaning all average reader and above will love it with slightly more picky will at most complain about the wish.. Thank you author and sorry for not able to give more detailed review.
writing quality (4 star) : good enough to read and at least unnoticeable grammar error for me story development (4 star) : good, the author not following the canon but not engaging enough to read. character design (2 star) : mc basically is doormat of konoha and other character is good for me but not the mc updating stability (4 star) : daily update world background (5 star) : good, idk what to say. if you can ignore pseudo slave mc this fanfic is good to read if not just don't read it it's not worth your time to read this shit, well at least there is no NTR (netorare).
dont waste your time on this fic if your easily angered mc makes stupid decisions and i a lap dog of konoah update time is not looking good writing quality is ok world background is fives stars (because it is naruto ) I dont like the story development character design is neat it had potential but its wasted SMH if you are a veteran webnovel reader i dont recommend it it will gt boring easily for beginners so yeah
he gives his companion his best jutsu, the yin and yang manual cultivation. i dont get why not just the one that swears loyalty to him, why give it to tsunade, the uzumakis, then one uzumaki is a real ninja of konoha.
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Its a OP naruto fic. I dislike the MC's decisions. For example he revives Tsunade's family to get into the hidden leaf at 7 years old. And these sort of decisions happen occasionally when the plot calls for a solution.
yes for now this is all I can give, I'll see how the story progresses. Honestly, I really don't like MC. hahhh see how it goes. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. OK I'm lost what the heck does that mean LOL LOL !!!!!!!!!!!!
pretty good book my author keep it up ................................................................................................................................
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just for having guren and karin i would already give 5 stars, for having the courage to change a lot of things is 5 stars, i just hope that the other villages also have buffs and of course akatsuki also has some buff to balance in the fourth war, i i know that akatsuki has a definite number of members, but it is a fanfic and a little increase would not hurt the balance
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Aside from some grammatical errors, there's not much that could lower this work's quality. Although a bit slow paced as in this point the MC hasn't encountered Canon yet, it's surprisingly good. All in all it's promising you, worth giving it a shot.
nope not for me specially the last chapter, he's giving techniques like candy to everyone even though it was not needed and he's too subservient to the hyuga clan the clan just decided to marry hinata to him and he's just become a yes man to the clan