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A boy died while being stabbed by Truck-kun. He met god who gave him his wishes and reincarnated him in the world of Dxd.
It's the first time I've written a story, so there may be flaws.
I will listen to his advice.
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I'm running out of ideas. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..
DONT GIVE UP EVEN THOUGH MANY ARE AGAINST YOU AND AS A NEW AUTHOR AND YOU MOTHER LANGUAGE IS NOT ENGLISH STRIVE HARD JUST TO POST MORE CHAPTERS CAUSE THE MORE CHAPTERS YOU POST THE MORE YOU IMPROVE
Hae you ideas for me? I read your comments., ....................................................................................................................................................
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the grammar is bad, there are bad plot points however the central thing is if a story is interesting, if it's interesting nothing else matters, this story is a fun read, I recommend
the whole story is very interesting, but the writing method please improve [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Man I like this fanfic if mc has power of mythical zoan type: ice phoenix or dragon devil fruit power along with ice ice fruit power then it will be perfect. Where mc can unsealed the power of mythical zoan type devil fruit power at age around 13 then it will awesome for having transformations into animal
really cringe story that makes no sense ever. just read the wishes and you can tell. not to mention the author packs like 6 different things into every wish, horrible writing.
Pleasenman before you star releasing any kind of book be sure that you at least know difference between genders and work harder on your grammer
writing is terrible feels like reading log book paragraph are not connected correctly so they don't make sense. what was point in selecting background of he wasn't going to stay there. Author gets he/she mixed up doesn't seem to improve. MC is not well planned and story if there is any doesn't inspire much to read
Good novel.. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm not 100% sure but from my understanding of this story is copy-paste from another story using translation. Grammar mistake, he or she, you can see that he Is using translation or unless the author is who don't know the difference between him or her. Player mind(body) I'm sure it gamer mind(body) but I don't know if the author wants this other than gamer. Nobility I'm sure this called peerage. Relative > familiar this is found in all chapter till 17
another dxd harem..... pretty sad, wonder how can people write and read these. I just hope it will turn into a romance ‐----------------------
Just one thing in the summary "stabbed by truck-kun" I didn't know trucks could stab lol 🤣 that's all I wanted to say. SPAM SPAM SPAM.....
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Just want to point out how in the synopsis it says he dies being stabbed by truck kun... .
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Well had to say it's a really good character and the background is good but updates for me are a little slow. Great novel the keep up good work
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please correct your problem with he, his that are for male and she, her for females it is very annoying. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Don't delete the 1-Star reviews. Improve your writing first then complain. Terrible Grammar. No decent explanation of events. Random crossovers everywhere. Almost no males anymore in story, very boring. All in all, just a pokemon collecting MC no nothing.