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A story about a young man named Katsu who received the Yughioh system Now he enjoys life in his own way with his loved ones and spirits. Yes this is a harem
I will upload anytime I like (usually in a week) if I am not uploading then I am thinking of ideas or I am busy. And I am not a Yughioh die hard fan but I still love the anime.
My grammar is not good but I still want to try and If you don’t like it go.
My stories is original and Mc, but not the characters I am going to use maybe some are. This is not my picture
If anyone wants to motivate to write you can go to patreon.com/neptune5.
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Author, if I had to describe your story with only one word, it would be: Speed Running. There is almost no dialog between characters. Everything is told and not shown by you. Characters do not ask who the MC is, where he came from, and what his intentions are. (except for a very shallow interaction in the beginning) all we have as story development is your "trust me bro, it happened". the only reason there are 3 stars on characters design, updating stability and world background; it's because the first and last one were not created by you, and about the second... I have to idea, so I gave an average score. (That is my honest criticism. It's not me attacking you)
More chapter please 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Author I don't know 😂 if you forgot it or doing it intentionally but there's is literally zero dialogue for any character including females leads in other than mc with internal monologue 🙃🙃
Can somebody please give a normal review i want to know if i want to read it because if he only use yugi cards then i wont read it because that is not something i like to read so can somebody give a detailed about the story sorry for my rant Ps author no hate to you but i want to know more before i read it My rating star is just 5 because i dont want to give a low score for my question
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quite good concept after rewrite it, good job, the minus of this pick so slow to update
Good pacing. The Mc needs to work with a few more cards to improve his game. I'm not expecting him to play like the next king of games, or duelling prodigy but throwing down a complicated menovoure or two every once in a while instead of powering through would make it more interesting.
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
It's not the best, but I'm enjoying it. Thank you for the effort btw........................................................................
Brother, change the cover and put a good one, it may bring you more readers. Also you should update more, (I might die before you finish writing Fanfic, lol)
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