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[Some chapters contain R-18 content.] [No rape] [No NTR]
"I will become strong with this self-tailored game system! What?! Why does it give quests based on my wife's wishes?!"
Kyoya got summoned to another world by a beauty whose aim was sole to get a weak husband! So weak that he wouldn't be able to get a harem and seek other women! Such motives quickly exposed beauty's real personality - a yandere - so Kyoya could only have two paths in his new life! Either to get enough strength to run away from the yandere wife or be strong enough to teach her common sense! A few days were enough to break one of his paths, however! But not only that, his special power, All Creation System, seemed to favor a yandere wife instead of him?!
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This novel is fairly average in writing quality in comparison with the novels on this website. There are a few grammars errors here and there, the writing doesn’t excite and feels more like a description of things that are happening. E.g. in chapter 3 the MC is fighting a puppy and gets bitten; this is what the author wrote: “It had bitten his arm and stood like that as if hanging onto his last chance to survive!” Besides that there is not much describing what happened, we don’t get the pain described from the MC's perspective, we don’t know how deep the bite is and neither can we read or feel the danger/fear. I think if a person who has never experienced a fight, he’d either become scared, feel pain and react accordingly or due to adrenaline ignore the pain to a certain extent and kill the puppy. Our MC reacts to the pain (that’s good) and then beats and kills the puppy. We don’t get a glimpse of his emotions though, he is practically unbothered after killing an animal. He sighs relieved at finally killing it. That’s the only glimpse we get at his feelings before, during or after the battle with a puppy. Later on his wife kills a few humans, the only thing our MC has to add to this is telling her not to and declaring he will not let her kill a bunch of other people. No reaction whatsoever to the dead people or their blown up heads. He must either be a psychopath that has convinced himself he’s normal or seen corpses himself many times before because no normal human will not react to humans getting their heads blown up. We don’t get much information on the world in the first 7 chapters, except that there are other humans, humanoid races, adventurers and that there is a world full of far more powerful people than the mc. It’s 7 chapters in so I can’t really criticize story development. Anyways I apologize for this long review. Also I only read 7 chapters, maybe the story does get better, maybe the characters will feel like humans later on but as it stands the start is bad. TLDR: MC's emotions either aren’t shown very well or he doesn’t have any.
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im too lazy to write a review, but the story is good so far. Have to say that you did a great job in the character development .......... ................... .............. ................ .......... .......
love it, its hilarious, its fantastic, its wonderful, and its super duper amazing, i recommending reading it with out a doubt you would love it for the cringey love yet romantic
I got diabetes from reading this. Jk. I thought i wouldn't like this because of the MC. But i was wrong he's more likable and realistic than most of the stories here. Definitely recommend if you want to remind yourself how lonely and miserable you are for not getting a yandere waifu like me 🙃.
im too lazy to write a review, but the story is good so far. Have to say that you did a great job in the character development .......... ................... .............. ........... ............ ................... .................. ..........................................
even though English is my only language I am an uneducated person. so there were some line or even paragraphs in the story I didn't understand and I wasn't sure if it was just me or the writing style or maybe it was translated wrongly...idk but it didn't affect the novel at all because you could get the gist of it. as for the story itself, it has many ups and downs and unexpected events that keep you guessing on how the book will turn out but it's a very funny and interesting novel. well that's all Ill say
Interesting concept and the r-18 tag has garnered my undivided attention of course. I will keep this bookmarked and feed it plenty of power stones with the help of my friends :)
Loving the character development in the story and such fluffy romance hope you keep up with this story! So far it’s beginning has a lot of potential and I can see this story becoming a hit!
Hey there friends!! Great story first of all, excellent plot and character development. Cute and exciting with mystery, action and suspense. Rrrooooomance abound with plenty of intriguing potential side stories. Please excuse the translation, everyone is trying their best and definitely give credit where credit is due!!!!!!
This my first review so it might be the best. Think i like abour this novel is a lot of yandere have one goal or ending which is the yandere gets the boy and what happens after is never known. This book has plan after they have ***. This means that the author is not just writing a soft **** novel, but has think about plot of the novel.
I think it's worth reading, so I recommended this novel to everyone to read👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Dropping a review and power stones for the sake of coming back to something good later :3 I dont understand how yandere and harem really goes together especially considering the synopsis.
This novel is great I love the fact that no matter how overwhelming the girl can be for him he thinks of some sentence to somehow convince her I'm loving this story more and more.
Umm, I like yanderes, but this is no good. It way too in your eyes. Every girl that he gets is a yandere. And don't get me started on the misunderstandings. It's was painful read for me overall.
Mistakenly came across this book but i have to say this is a really good read I love the mixture of harem and yandere, it's one to read and enjoy. It is amusing and the characters are great.
Please author go back and touch up upon your earlier chapters. The concept is so cool and I've been wanting to read a story like this for awhile but cant find any decent ones. I tried to read the first few chapters and the story is so enticing but the grammar mistakes drive me insane.
I...Haven't read this yet but I hope there's some challenges get thrown from author to the Mc so it becomes more interesting but you know its just a suggestion which you can just Ignore though ...well time dive in! By the way PLEASE DONT DROP... .......... ...... . . . . . ...................
Quite an amusing story for anyone. Character development is good, world building is slow but steady, and the grammar/punctuation is really well done.
Hello, I am the author of this novel! What I want to write is a cute yandere wife who is all over her husband! She wants to be with only him! This is surely no good, but this is where the husband steps in! He will change his yandere wife, teach her common sense so that their relationship is the best! Kyoya has to grow in a strength to achieve all of this! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here!