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Travel through the world of Naruto and become a member of the medical department of Konoha Village and the corpse disposal team.
Uchiha Natsu, with mediocre aptitude, originally thought that he would eat and wait for death for a lifetime, and then run away on the night of the genocide.
Until one time when dealing with the corpse of an S-rank rebel, I found that the back…
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It's really great and interesting Naruto fanfiction!!! I love it!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too 👍 I like the idea of system corpse point, it's interesting to see he get point from destroy/decomposed corpse.. I don't mind an op MC (although he doesn't how strong he is after 3 years he got the system).. I also don't mind how cautious MC is (many say he's coward because he always fighting with a clone, and he only come after fight is over.. But I think he's smart and overly cautious, although he's not to do so now, his wood clone can hold again Raikage and Tsuchikage).. I hope MC/Natsu can become Hokage (and maybe kill Danzo, the two conselor/elders, and Sarutobi).. Konoha need new hokage/blood to change and make Konoha great again (especially kill Danzo) Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
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Don't leave this midway and continue to upload the story is good to read and I like slice-of-life stories in which MC gets stronger silently and fast 😊😊💙
Just one question: why are they disposing corpses of enemy ninjas without:- Yamanaka mind reading trading it back for their own comrades corpse after the war Studing kekei gankai or other things Giving it to medical or scientific department I feel like ninja won't do something like this especially to S rank enemies whose bodies hide alot of secrets.
Updated all the previous chapters today and changed some names .......................................................................................................................
I've corrected Chapters 1 to 11 today changed the name of Uziki Xiyan to Uzuki Yugao Please suggest what more improvement I can make I'll do that
I'm going to correct the grammar and other things in all the chapters and it will be completed in 2 or 3 days What I want to ask is if should I change the names of the characters too
It's a pretty good fanfic, but you can do better in the translation. First you can use 'Grammarly' to check out things, and then you can use 'ChatGPT' to find the wrong names easily. All of them are free, and it takes seconds to do, making your translations a little bit better. Continue your work and search for softwares that can help you doing it more easily and in no time you will get more readers and hopefully earn some cash.
It's good just keep posting 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Honestly, the author doesn’t know what gender his characters are half the time. Besides this the names of the characters change in the same paragraph. Grammar is terrible, no sentence structure. The world background could’ve been good, the power design was interesting in the first 2 chapters. After a “3 year” time skip the Mc now has more chakra than a whole squad of Jonins and Chunins, I believe it was stated to be they don’t even have 1% of my total chakra. Seriously? Thats chapter 3 or 4. After that it’s the classic I’ll hide my strength so I won’t stand out. There was no point. I got up to chapter 28/30 maybe. I don’t really recall the exact chapter. I just know that the Mc could make 600 shadow clones that could all spam rasengan’s to hold of the Raikage. That’s another thing, instead of saying Kage he calls them thied generation shadows, fourth generation shadows.
good story keep it up....................💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥💥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙👌👌👌👌👌
over all, the story sucks. the translation is not even completed, and the grammar is pretty bad. over all, the story sucks. the translation is not even completed, and the grammar is pretty bad.
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It's a pretty good fanfic, but you can do better in the translation. First you can use 'Grammarly' to check out things, and then you can use 'ChatGPT' to find the wrong names easily. All of them are free, and it takes seconds to do, making your translations a little bit better. Continue your work and search for softwares that can help you doing it more easily and in no time you will get more readers and hopefully earn some cash.