I am at India on 1840

LV 4

Swikong

It's a interesting/entertaining story which keeps you engaging once you begin read. Writing Quality: It's good overall it's just a narrative type and conversation occurs only with some characters and also a bit fast paced, it may good for some (me) and bad taste in some but you can't deny that this WHAT IF! kind of story is great. ✅️ Story Dev: A bit fast paced would be better if it was a bit medium but some chaps with fast paced when you use time-skips. ✅️ Character Design: A good character with ever developing so it's ✅️ Updating Stability: ✅️ World Background: Although it covers the Bharat (Original Akhand Bharat Map) of that time i hope it covers all the parts in the chapters including Dogra Kings of Jammu & Kashmir, and many other states including Northeastern Parts which is being neglected, which makes me sad as it was mentioned in Mahabharat Kurukshetra War such Manipur, Twipra/Tripura King Trilochan Subrai Debbarma although at that time all the people of Twipra/Tripura surname was "Tipra" including the king but later different surnames were divided due advised for different surnames for divide & rule which was dirty politics, and including other states. Overall the story going great i hope the author completes the story with grand completion. As Vinayak (Veer) Damodar Savarka said: Bharat is our motherland but we should also not forget it's our fatherland. 🙏🇮🇳✊️Jai Bharat✊️🇮🇳🙏 🙏🇮🇳✊️Bharat Mata Ki Jai✊️🇮🇳🙏 🙏🇮🇳✊️Bharat Vijayi Bhava✊️🇮🇳🙏