/ Book&Literature / HP: The Black Star
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A man dies unexpectedly and finds himself in a mysterious, ethereal place where he meets a figure named Rob. Rob offers him three wishes in exchange for his untimely death. Reborn as Damian Black, he embarks on a new adventure in the wizarding world, filled with opportunity and intrigue. Join him to see the changes he will cause.
The character development would take a bit of the time. So don't expect much in the first year or the second year. There will also be a minor selective Weasley and Dumbledore bashing.
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better to read the original , this is waste of time . no plot no nothing . superficial story, author forgot to write the novel that was in his head. its still in his head lol.
author fcuked up royally , his thoughts jumbled up and the story in his head stayed there only, it's a mess
This story feels like the author wrote it with AI cause multiple times in the later chapters around chapter 24 they repeat things they already did and act like they are meeting for the first time like during the the ball during chapter 21 the mc meet astoria and now in chapter 21 they are acting like they are meeting for the first time and also in chapter 24 the mc is talking about cleaning the black home when he already did that chapters ago, I liked the story in the beginning but it seems that thing are being forgotten and are now being repeated. I am gonna read more and hope it dosent continue but it probably will
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The idea and premise of the story is good, but the execution is abysmal. You can feel the AI writing the story like a kick in the nuts. The MC makes plans in the beginning and just forgets they exist. In addition there are inconsistencies big as the Grand Canyon (meeting the Greengrass family at the Ministry ball and then meeting at King's Cross).
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This looks to be one of the better Harry Potter fanfictions. I like that this isn't a power trip story.
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Didn't read anything more after he chose as a wish from a ROB to get some weird dinosaur fusion as his animagus form