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4.29 (13 số lượng người đọc)

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makaila_hall

I really hope that there will be more. I loved the flow of the story and the fact it didn’t take so king for the plot of the mistress wannabe to unravel! Not enough stories like this and I truly wish there was more!!!

2mth
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neotheo82

Is chapter 10 the end? Although it's a kinda of a misunderstanding but I still think the boyfriend should be given a 2nd chance that easily. He lied behind her back and prioritised the other woman more. That mom got miscarriage thing is not a solid reason for him to actually treat the other better. If he loves the FL shouldn't he remember her birthday first before celebrating the "sister". Who in the world treats his/her "sister" like.

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2mth
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Jasmica_Lumibao

nakakaiyak sya nak, worth it naman 8/10 ka nak kasi dipa tapos

1mth
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Tiaona_Jones

This story is actually very good. I enjoyed every part of it and was a little bummed when it ended. There was a couple mistakes, but didn't change the experience. I hope more chapters are published!

1mth
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p_jams

I love the story yet sometimes it needs to be proof read before publishing and make sure to get that good plot and climax. But despite of everything, it is still a good story. I want to know though why does Alex became cold at first then when he realized he lost the girl who truly cares about him finally keeps chasing her..

1mth
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ice_miranda

Love it! I want more of this fast-paced story, atleast it's not dragging to be long enough we're story and cliche will just repeat itself over and over again, plot is good, this is better,

1mth
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Atosha_Lang_5027

I saw this on Facebook and it piqued my interest and I love to read. I’m glad I gave this novel a chance, I’m wondering how it going to end and if Vivian is really sorry or she’s up to something. Keep up the good work!🫶🏽😘

2mth
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DaoistfqElt5

Its very good but it shoul not be written too long or else it will turn boring along the way. It also depends on author on how they want to end this both HE and BE is acceptable after all not everyone can give second chance if theyre badly hurt right. Its unfair to them even if theyre just a character inside abook.

2mth
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Haley_Sulliven

I believe it is written well enough for a book that was not published in print, only found online, and has no distinguished author. However, the story seems to contradict itself and change the plot a great many times. It needs to focus on one story, not multiple.

2mth
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Krabas_Gaisras

There's a few mistakes but the story is easy to read, I like the story but I think is a bit clichè , that's ok 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♀️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀 👍 👌 🙆‍♂️ 😄 😉 😀

2mth
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Burilda0D

Would love to see more!! There are very few errors which is rare on here.

2mth
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Swelly_Lima

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2mth
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ABDULLAH_MAMARINTA

I cant view the other chapter. Hhshshshdhxbbxbshgsgdggxbxhzhhshdhxhxhhxhdhdhdhdkahsgsgsggzvsgwgxhhzvsggsgsgsggxhhshshdbxbududjhdhxhhhagzgxsh

3mth
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Tác giả EvelynGrace