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Harry Potter: Wishing Upon A Moon
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Benedict Everest was cast into the world of Harry Potter two years before the gears of fate would start turning.
In the beginning he wanted nothing to do with the main plot. He dreamed of finishing his education and getting out of the picture as quick as he possibly could.
However, every man has his weakness...
And his was Luna.
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It is written relly well. The dialoge is fluid and you can understand who is talking. I also like the style of the story with falshbacks in the middle ecc.... So i ask of you don't drop this. Just one chapter a month but please make it come to the end
Love the changes you made to the story, really love your original character, and Luna is so adorable that i just loved the whole story straight away. I wished for a bit more Flitwick involvement rather than Mcgonagall, being a Ravenclaw fic and all, but i guess it can't all hit perfect. The last few chapters have been very nice and sets up a lot of mystery, can't wait to read more.
Cute and really interesting story so far. Loving it so far. ........ ............... Cute and really interesting story so far. Loving it so far. ........ ...............