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Harry Potter The Prime Merlinian
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Harry potter gets picked up by Balthazar blake and Veronica from Sorcerer's apprentice.This fanfic is written for pure enjoyment purposes.
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Having the Harry Potter universe and Sorcerer's Apprentice is a really cool idea. It really sucks when the main characters from both stories are mashed together and the storyline is the exact same. for an example in the scene where David fools around with the ring after being told not to move is the same thing Harry did, you would think Harry being young and abused would follow an order based on fear but no. it's the same story it is just mashed together with some Harry Potter lore.
This just start so I don't know what to say yet. Not much I can see apart from... Hurm.. Let just say that I hope to see the real influence of merlin apprentice.. And dumbledore is not even qualified to lick his toes...
Absolutely brilliant! I like how you are positioning things and the dark dumbledork is a refreshing view... Hope to read more from you, will be adding this to my list!
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i love the idea and it seems really cool so far but its really fast paced and there's not a lot of context. you should add in some of the smaller stuff like when they go to there dorms and just add in some filler chapters, but its an overall good story.
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