Harry Potter Natural

LV 13

maskhara

story is well written and the characters work even if they arent at all loyal to the source in some cases... what bothers me isnt a critique of the content but rather the concept.... hes self aware and has experiance meta gaming but is strangely not absorbing or adapting to the setting.... obviously this allows the gag to keep functioning but ultimately it goes against what he is as a metagaming dnd character to not even try to break the system and absorb power from the hp system

LV 5

eternalice

The story is quite funny but the D&D wizard is out of place in HP world especially if they can’t cast spells normally like other people in the story setting. D&D character build may be interesting in D&D but in real world (or any other fantasy world) it’s unlikely that people (or characters) behave as such. Moreover the grammar and updates are something to be improved upon. But all is not bad, the main character is fun and his D&D references and other characters reactions to it are quite entertaining.

LV 4

CruelReality

Really well written in terms of diplogue and plot. I highly suggest giving this a try. However, the issue for me is that I dislike the premise that he can only use D&D magic. Also, as someone not very familiar with D&D upon looking into the magic system I utterly despise how it functions. Thus, I will say this is a great story just not to my own taste. 7.2/10, solid and worth trying.

LV 4

RandomWeb

Amazing story, and has been an extreme fun read for me. It also has a lot of elements of humor which I enjoy. Definitely recommend reading it!

LV 15

craze_8093

hilariously good, right amount of humor and character Insanity

LV 3

Blutmond

Good

LV 15

Death_Kidd_29

I got a headache from reading this I mean it's cool and all but I'm not a dungeon and dragon player so it's confusing as f***but that's on me for not knowing about dungeons and dragons to understand the book or to like it

LV 4

DaoistyhmT6N

one of the funniest fanfic i have ever read while not sacrificing the story, dialogue or characters. the choices and dialogue aren't forced and are still really funny and interesting. recommend

LV 14

ErrorLynx

Really good fanfic. Well-written and the humor is right in my alley. Please don't drop.

LV 2

Yousef_hijjawi

it's pretty good, in my opinion, though naming the chapters would be a good addition, not saying their isn't anything else that could be improved.

LV 4

Bishop_990101

It is a very good story, although it is quite confusing at first. I think my confusion is highly attributed to whether or not the MC is a game character from a D&D game, which makes sense as to why he wouldn't have memories of his parents and can "metagame" calling jargon from D&D, but the point that he can't use wands seems pretty stupid to me. He does not need spellcasting focus as a wizard, but that does not stop a wizard from gaining a spellcasting focus. A wand in Harry Potter could be counted as a magical item and if he does have other items that he's attuned to then systematically sure. But, spellcasting foci doesn't need attunement to functionally use, so why can't he use wands from Harry Potter.

LV 2

Yash_Shah_7482

Loved it. Very interesting. Though wish chps were a bit longer.

LV 10

Midvors

I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.

LV 1

Emu_Lator

Was funny at first since the mc sounds delusional. But that works if the mc is doing it deliberately. Like some 4th wall knowledge of a reincarnator. But the way this was set up was mc only knows his back story and very much hollow in everything else. His personality doesnt hold up beyond his otherworldy mutterings. Also a main character being in hp yet not be able to use their magic, kinda makes the whole thing pointless

LV 5

zimbait

This novel is called Harry Potter and the Natural 20 by Sir Poley at ffnet, it's already completed.

LV 4

Ashish_Kumar_1835

The story is very erratic. Not at all suitable for a novel narration, the dialogue looks like it's suited for a crack fic or a manga or anime. Not a diss on the story.

LV 4

ChangedReviewer

Living proof that D&D is just for nerds. The writing is cringe, author does not know HP lore and the whole story makes 0 sense. MC is like a braindead monkey that jumps around like a total clown. He is from D&D but he acts like a nerd who just likes playing D&D. His character is completely messed up and butchered. Don't even try to understand what the author had planned for it. Drugs are a bad thing. Overall there is nothing redeeming about this.

LV 13

User_Name001

Amazingly funny novel and the premise is so refreshing. This was an amazing find and any fan of hp novels would enjoy. Only downside is that the Snape misunderstanding in the first year goes on for quite some time.