Tóm tắt
The story of Kael, a magician with the ability of Memory Make from Fairy Tail, within the universe of Harry Potter.
He will only have a girlfriend, in the very distant future, after finishing the whole plot of Harry Potter and some other things, he will change to another fictional universe.
English is not my mother tongue, it is my fourth language so do not expect a perfect grammar. I usually use the google translator and then I correct the mistakes because I do not have enough time to write directly in English.
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- Chất lượng bài viết
- Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
- Phát triển câu chuyện
- Thiết kế nhân vật
- Bối cảnh thế giới
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I'm starting out with a five, but may lower it as this continues. Hoping to have a stable update rate. The grammar is well enough especially for it being your fourth tongue. It's fun with him knowing future knowledge along with a magic from Fairy Tail so it'll be interesting to read. Keep it up, I need another long novel to enjoy :P
Seems good so far but it's a little too early to tell if the quality will hold, that being said the setup seems good and I like the premise, so good luck I'm looking forward to reading more
I maybe a bit bias here in giving a 5 but i like HP fanfics, this one has a whole lot of potential, so i am begging you to A) not prematurely drop this B) not botch it up lol C) Be consistent in your updates as you can (RL makes things hard i understand) D) continue to be awsome Good luck i am rooting for ya