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Harry Potter / Highschool DxD : A deal with the devil
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Thomas Grayson is just an ordinary eight-year-old boy, or so he thinks until an incident at the zoo reveals a shocking truth: he's a wizard. While visiting the reptile exhibit, Thomas accidentally sets free a dangerous snake that nearly kills his parents. But before disaster strikes, he discovers that he has the power to speak to snakes and control them.
Soon after, Thomas receives a letter inviting him to attend Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. As he begins his magical education, he learns that he's not the only one with extraordinary abilities. In this shared universe between Harry Potter and Highschool DxD, Thomas discovers that the world is filled with supernatural beings and factions vying for power.
As he navigates this new world, Thomas faces challenges and dangers from all sides. Dark wizards, demons, and fallen angels are just a few of the threats he must overcome. But with the help of new friends and allies, Thomas begins to uncover a sinister plot that threatens not only the magical world but also the human world.
As he delves deeper into the mystery, Thomas realizes that he may be the only one who can stop the coming catastrophe. Will he be able to harness his newfound powers and save both worlds, or will he succumb to the forces of darkness? Find out in this thrilling crossover between Harry Potter and Highschool DxD, filled with magic, action, and suspense.
Notice : I do not own Harry Potter and Highschool DxD, nor its characters.The only thing I own is my own MC and the way the world would end in the end. Also the photo is made using an AI,for those who are wondering.
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Yo, i just see you write Dxd fic Here is my advice never write Dxd story by using Dxd anime as reference, Because unlike in light novel, dxd version anime ruin a lot of characters, especially Issei's characters hard to the point that reduce him into fanservice machine.
Did you read Harry Potter? Because you made them learn wingardium leviosa two time and made some disperency there and there to make the plot. Like healing bones in two month when regrowing them take a night.
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The beginning works really well and got me into reading this ff. For the most part feels like a new take on HP. But in saying that there are some glaring inconsistencies. Learning the levitation charm twice. MC getting in trouble for having a dagger focus (which really isn't that much more dangerous than a regular wand). Ravenclaw losing their seeker with a broken arm (they have magic, you need a different reason if you want your MC on the team). Ravenclaw Vs Hufflepuff match being first and also on the same day as classes. And then the next day is Griffindor vs Slytherin. Then asking if they are going to the three broom sticks (you got to set that up differently if first years can go). Dialogue since the quiditch arc needs some work as well. A lot of it unfortunately does not make sense.Overall, I've really enjoyed this FF up until the quiditch arc. I can and will forgive a lot of problems, please work on pacing if you are making changes to the timeline like you did. Set up is important. In saying all that I appreciate the entertainment you have given me with you writing it has been fun up until around the 30th chapter. I will continue reading to see if these problems continue.
Not the worst, the power level is somewhat confusing, but it does the job. As for the story...well I kind of like the MC and how he's slowly becoming more mature as well as how he starts to realize his feelings, or I at least I hope that's what I read until now. Still I'm curious about his Sacred gear and how will the big shots react to it.
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It's HP and DxD smashed together. What can you ask for more? Other than killing Ron Weasley.... Me like it. xoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxoxooxoxoxoxoxoxoox
Love the premise of the story for now. Idk if I like the harem part, but considering tom's age, well I'll continue to read for now. Hope for at least 100 more chapters!
Sinceramente la historia me gusto pero lo único que me llego a molestar es la memoria de los personajes, prácticamente hacen un descubrimiento importante que ayudaría mucho en la trama, pero en el siguiente capitulo cuando buscan esa misma información se les olvida que lo saben y encima hablan de lo molesto que es no saber esa misma información
The power balance sucks, there is only 1 hp/dxd crossover that i read which had a good power balance where wizards were honestly garbage and could never get past high level of power not mentioning ultimate etc... funny thing is author wrote is in such vague way that i can't even guess current level of MC. Also even though it's my personal preference i utterly hate that he just tells everyone his and other secrets. Reading this i almost wish he said something that would make someone target him and cause everyone around him to die so he would learn to keep his mouth shut... I honestly hate then there is a super positive/naive protagonist in a world that can only be called darks af HP universe is dark and DxD is even worse and seeing someone like that in these worlds i wouldn't bet a broken piece of trash on him surviving there. So him actually surviving just makes me frustrated and feels like the only reason MC is alive is plot armour. Well that would be it for my rant i wish you luck with the fanfic, it's rather good but definitely not my taste. I also advice you to not buff the wizards as i saw many fanfics like that and it just killed them extremely fast, making new levels for wizards that mc can reach is ok but don't boost the general population si that aurors can suddenly fight middle and high level devils etc... Also i recomend you to look up dxd power levels and find out strongest/weakest characters of said level and their power/abilities and not ignore magical resistance of other races like devils etc.