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Halloween Party
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The first Halloween Party of the town is organized. Many young people wants to go to the party. Jiya and her friend and twin brother want to go as well like all the other youngsters of the town. But they didn't get the invitation. At last when they lost hope invitations appear in their college locker.
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First of all CONGRATULATIONS for coming on the second spot in the Contest. You diverted from your romance style and tried something different and I liked it. It wasn't up to the mark but for the first try it was good. I hope you'll try out other genres too. You can do good in that as well I think. About the book I would say that there could have. been more story. However I know it was for a contest so..... The last chapter was unexpected.... directly five years later. And I felt that there are loose ends in the story. I don't know whether you have left it for purpose or it was because you wanted to complete the story but there are. It was a good try and it is a good story. Also update regularly.
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