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Gravity System
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Jack was a normal boy, but when thought to be getting a useless power, he gains an unknown Power that has the foundation to shake the world.
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As a man of culture I must ask you... "Do you believe in gravity?" MADE IN HEAVEN!!! I'm taking my ride with destiny Willing to play my part Living with painful memories Loving with all my heart Made in heaven, made in heaven It was all meant to be, yeah Made in heaven, made in heaven That's what they say Can't you see That's what everybody says to me Can't you see Oh I know, I know, I know that it's true Yes it's really meant to be Deep in my heart I'm having to learn to pay the price They're turning me upside down Waiting for possibilities Don't see too many around Made in heaven, made in heaven It's for all to see Made in heaven, made in heaven That's what everybody says Everybody says to me It was really meant to be Oh can't you see Yeah everybody, everybody says Yes it was meant to be Yeah yeah When stormy weather comes around It was made in heaven When sunny skies break through behind the clouds I wish it could last forever, yeah Wish it could last forever, forever Made in heaven I'm playing my role in history Looking to find my goal Taking in all this misery But giving it all my soul Made in heaven, made in heaven It was all meant to be Made in heaven, made in heaven That's what everybody says Wait and see, it was really meant to be So plain to see Yeah, everybody, everybody, everybody tells me so Yes it was plain to see, yes it was meant to be Written in the stars Written in the stars Written in the stars
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Grammar and spelling are out of wack, character concepts are weak and cliche. Story plot could become interesting going forward but the story lacks a significant hook.
might read later︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎ ︎ ︎ ︎︎ ︎
good so far will definitly follow it......................................................................................................................
Defiantly didn't rate it five stars out of favoritism aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa