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Coiling Dragon fanfiction – What if, after his death, Portgas D. Ace was reincarnated into the universe of Coiling Dragon? Will Ace be able to rise to the peak of this new world? Find out here!
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Chapter Release Schedule:
Webnovel - Thursdays & Sundays
Patreon: Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday, & Sunday - Patreon.com/AceInCoilingDragon
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WARNING – This IS a FanFiction, so certain elements of the story WILL deviate from the original, like:
1 – There are slight changes to the profound mysteries and weapon comprehension.
2 – The personalities of certain characters.
3 – The actual GOD of this series isn't Hongmeng...
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Average chapter length:
Book 1 - 1000-1500 words
Book 2 onwards - 1500-2000 words

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christa
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This is such an amazing concept for a fan-fiction book. I’m really looking forward to seeing what the author does with it!!!

1yr
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Ashura03

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1yr
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Kurosis

Love the story so far. But that doesn’t matter what matters is you don’t drop it like the other CD fanfic. Would be a shame. And the rating should be higher 😡

1yr
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leo26
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A well written fanfic with good quality Grammer.My problem with this fanfic is that its frustrating to read, The drama in this fanfic makes my head hurt because of all the stupid wuxia cliches there are in this novel.I read fanfic to relax not to feel frustrated and this to me is a frustrating read, Especially the last few chapters have been intorable in the department and I also don't like the decision of him having no element affinity, his literal name was fire fist ace and you didn't even give him fire affinity and to me that's disappointing and I only see that decision making more unnecessary drama in the story. Overall good quality story but I won't recommend it.

1yr
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Daoist8pUWci

How is it that every fanfiction that starts out as irony about cultivators turns into a regular cultivator novel? Author, return to the light side of the force.

1yr
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GodLol
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the reason I liked coiling drogans was because the people in it were so much better than other Chinese novels that are all about petty revenge and face slapping but in your story you made them all into young masters I wouldn't mind if u did it to some random characters but u did it to the main family when they were super nice and chill in the original, the mother was literally a Saint and for some reason you made her petty and comically evil ,all in all if you liked coiling dragon for its refreshing pace of almost no young masters this story is probably not for you. also, Ace is super au he is not even a little bit like in one piece it you should think of Ace as an oc in the fanfic.

1yr
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DaoOfVore

iits fanfic, the fanfic author is dragging the story against rough asphalt with 100 worded chapters just to say he put out a chapter when most of us rather he take 2-3 days to take his time with the chapters and let us know if any irl circumstances pop up and he/she will be away for some time.

1yr
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LifeGivesYouLemons

First off I'll say that the grammar of the story is great and the idea was unique. Coiling Dragon was one of the first novels I have read so a fanfic of it is always nice to see. Light spoilers below. There are however a few big issues. In the first few chapters the MC declares to be less impulsive in this life due to his actions having consequences in his previous life. While calm in the beginning within a few chapters the MC throws that all away and becomes a lot more antagonistic than most Chinese MCs to basically everyone with power, which, funnily enough have consequences. I also do not understand the need for the non element during the test and while I'm not sure if that will change or not later, it is unnecessary drama that is more liable to annoy readers then make them want to read further. Considering he was known as "Fire" Fist Ace, many readers probably logically assumed that fire would be his element. Of course the hype before the element test where the MC of course antagonizes someone to then have the curve ball where he has no elements makes it that much worse to accept. Therefore I've had to unfortunately rage quit due to this cliché where there always has to be a problem with an MC in a Chinese novel. Good luck author, I still say that the novel is unique and definitely worth a read.

1yr
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SeventhLord

I have read 43 chapters and it's okay. The grammar and the words flow great. There are currently 100 chaps and a quick skim shows that there are at least a few chapters every month. The plot is okay, but there are a few things that are off-putting. (1) Ace is inconsistent, going from OP Ace to acting with typical xianxia arrogance. (2) The appeal of Coiling Dragon was its unique power system and characters not acting like those from typical xianxia stories, but it has started devolving to that and may as well be an AU because the characterization of one character that is literally one of the most important plot-points in the original has been changed without explanation so far. (3) The OP downplay. I can ignore making Haki visible due to an in-story answer, but saying that an 8th-rank magic beast is on par with the Yonko is stupid. Saints have a pretty consistent power scaling at mountain+ which is much lower than Whitebeard who can cause a tsunami on Sabaody as a side-effect of his fight in Marineford and the other Yonko who scale to him. Islands, their distance, and the world itself are also much larger than they initially appear in One Piece so even with Yulan Plane's incredibly large size that should still put Yonko above an 8th grade magic beast.

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Malikim

Bad Fanfic ~ ~ ~ ~ Bad story

1yr
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_Immortal_Panda_

Just for the fact it’s IETs novel fanfic(there are so less fanfic of these, or I haven’t been able to find) and till now how much I had read, I think it’s got a great potential!! Keep up the great work author and please don’t drop it. ❤️❤️

1yr
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PUERKO_Senpai

It is a very addictive story, it has its ups and downs but it is very good. It impresses me how the author managed to perfectly capture the personality of Ace, a reckless idiot with a good heart and a hunger for adventure.

1yr
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Artenser

quiet good story beginning looking forward for your story

1yr
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SLIKOH

A fanfiction on Coiling Dragon with Ace,its amazing,i love they fanfiction on Coiling Dragon,thank you author ! ---------------------------------------------

1yr
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PUERKO_Senpai

Nice fanfiction!!! but . . . author-dono will write LEMONS, please!!!~~~~~

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1yr
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ScionOfDegeneracy

Bro writing a CD fanfic with focusing only on the Mortal world. The world of CD is infinite, so much to explore.

1yr
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Einstein3

Look, I'm a sucker for Coiling Dragon. It was one of my first novels within the genre and to this day, it holds a special place in my heart. That's not the only reason to love this story, though. Writing Quality: Superb. It's original and doesn't follow the plot at all while retaining a great amount of the originals charm. Story Development: While there are some clichés and tropes, the author plays around with them in a good way. You can predict the plotlines pretty well if you are a veteran in the genre but it's executed in a charming way so I see no real problem here. Character Design: 5 stars without a doubt. Ace feels alive as do all of the supporting characters. Kong is an arrogant lil sh*te but we love him anyways. Updating Stability: It's never going to be enough so I can only give 4 stars here, sorry. World Background: I love the way the author is expanding on the source material. His inclusion of Haki is fluid and I'm heavily invested in the path to power that Ace will take. It's one of the strong points of the novel and he's keeping us on our toes with it. Conclusion: If you loved the original, you'll adore this one too. If you haven't read the original, you don't have to as the author explains most things rather inclusively but I still recommend reading the original simply because it's a good novel. Thank you for picking up such an underappreciated world, author. I really hope you'll take it all the way to the end even though it's an incredibly daunting task. However far you'll go with it, I'll be with you every step.

1yr
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Fat_Cultivator

It’s decent. Probably amazing for some people but not my cup of tea. Everything was amazing, till it was revealed ace had no elemental talent. Maybe he has some secret talent. Maybe author has plans, but this ruines it for me sorry :((. I will keep reading though, too invested

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Yuval_Zabary

it is seems good though i wonder what element he will have, or maybe even an edict?

1yr
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Sammy_The_Sloth

enjoyed it very much, till the simping began .

1yr
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