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Random Dude Reincarnated as A Gargantuan Leviathan In the world of ATG.
*This is my first novel thing so don't expect to much.
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Viết đánh giánot gonna lie i have never read ATG I'm only reading cause i saw Leviathan. i just hope the MC doesn't get a human form it makes no sense to have one when he's not human. dont listen to all the people that say you are moving too fast that's the whole point of putting the overpowered tag on.
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it feels too rushed, like he spends a couple minutes or hours looking around and then goes to sleep for 20 years and now he's powerful. it also feels forced, like the reasoning behind characters doing something isn't explained, and everyone does whatever the mc wants them to do. there needs to be more logic behind decisions and more detailed descriptions of things and places. in my opinion the mc is progressing too fast, and it doesn't feel like he's earned that power, I get that the mc is meant to be overpowered, but there is no struggle at the beginning, and it's more like everything's just being handed to him. I like the idea of the mc being op and unparalleled, but not from the start. I believe it's more entertaining when the mc stumbled into coincidence after coincidence and nearly dies before getting the hang of things. in my opinion the mc was too calm about being reincarnated, I would still linger on the fact, shocked that I'm in another world. I hope this review is taken as constructive criticism.
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its cool just the mc is the type to let the person who just tried to poison him and turn her into a maid.... If that doesn't say the type of mc this is gonna be I don't know what will.
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I like the idea I just struggle with the fact the Mc gets every thing he ever needs by complete luck like I get getting op from wishes but when he's just swimming around and finds op stuff? isn't the best o well I like the idea
Tiết lộ SpoilerPretty good overall, it moves at a very fast pace but it's not so fast that it's annoying. The English is readable thankfully and the mc isn't painfully dumb like many other stories I've seen.
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Tác giả Hollo54
I see Gargantuan Leviathan and i click faster than the decrease of my oxygen in Subnautica
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