/ Book&Literature / Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms
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Harry Potter is reborn as the son of Brandon Stark and Ashara Dayne, he will make the North into the strongest kingdom in the world.
(I will copy paste my favorite story "Reborn in the wild Westeros" of Arkane007 while putting some details myself and changing some until the moment that it was dropped and I will finish it myself)
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I'm happy that someone picked this up as I really liked the OG fanfic and was very sad when it was dropped. I can't wait to see what you do with it.
i think i've seen this fanfiction somewhere in the Fanfiction.com but it just got deleted or something but thank you for picking this up :D ..........................
It's just disappointing, to be honest, and is an incredibly stale read. Character development and story development do not feel natural but forced. The quality of writing isn't good enough; the story is basically 'character x says this. Character y is uncertain about this. Character z supports character x. Character y decides it is not a bad idea. Character x then revolutionises his whole kingdom and becomes a superpower.' It doesn't make much sense at all and the attempt to combine GOT and HP is laughable. Within 4 chapters the MC conveniently finds a huge stash of gold which is never mentioned in any iterations of GOT and then it is just brushed over as if that is a normal occurrence. In conclusion, if you want to read an actually good novel, ignore this. If you're up with a meh read that will very mildly satisfy you, feel free to try, but don't say I didn't warn you.
Dude, why are you reincarnating Gabrielle?? Even without her, the story could be good. there is also the problem with how the dialogues are spoken. They come as too straightforward. If you had spent some time, you could have made this better
Amazing story so far, I hope you keep up the great work Author-sama.⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
I'm happy someone picked this story and continues it. I'm hoping for a harem tho. Gabriela for the north, Daenerys for the middle and Arienne for the south. Thanks again for bringing this story back!
I think it would be better if you made changes to Catelyn's character from much earlier than from where you originally started. As it is the bashing you are throwing at her, doesn't make sense by canon reasoning nor by this story reasoning. While you clearly don't like her, and so the writing starts to conflict.
I'm really happy you picked this up🙌, don't be discouraged and keep writing! I hope your own work is better than the original, though. It has longer chapters with fewer grammar mistakes, which is why I’m holding this story up higher than others. Though I wish you’d have rewritten it; everything is just working out too well and too easily for Harry. 5 million gold dragons, a hoard of previously undiscovered mines, unknown-secret-Stark-treasure, canal-creating-earthquakes, unstoppable-loyal-metamorph-assassins, etc. Harry’s already a powerful wizard, he doesn’t really need all that plot armor, or at least not all at once. My advice, more character development and ease up on the ‘sucking-up’. We know he’s great, it’s a little too overworked when repeated over and over just how much. Once in a while, more subtlety, is enough. Also, the chapters with POVs, other than Aryan’s, are the best in my opinion! You’ve showed us what he’s done for the North; more chapters with a bunch of different POVs in each chapter from different lords, heirs/heiresses, and smallfolk will expand the story and make it seem fuller. Cersei, Manderley, Robb, Jon, random northmen, etc. Can’t wait to read your work!
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Although this story is very good in terms of story telling/world building, there are certain areas which would benefit from improvement One of these being the dialogue, which is pretty blocky and not really lifelike- its like talking to Pathfinder in Apex or Connor in Detroit Become Human. Another thing that would benefit is the common sense, like how did the North get access to Rice (Maybe Magic? But Aryan (HP) doesn't have a wand yet so ye) or like how he says "They are katanas, lightweight and capable of cleaving a person in half", which in all honesty, is a common mistake and can be forgiven (Its just here as an example) Think that's it, other than these things, the FanFic is awesome and definitely suggest a read (should you ignore the things above)
Well... Story had some potential, at chapter 1, but I read till c5 and basically mc is like god in GoT world. He controls minds of everyone to do what he wishes easily, including his family. Making him an pretty scum of an character. He has op wizard powers. And on top of all that, author just makes everything in world happen in favor of mc anyways. Earthquake freaking made moat across the neck, North found diamonds etc. We know pretty much nothing will be obstacle for mc so I'm asking myself why bother reading. Besides, I'm only at chapter 5 but North is already well on it's way to become equal to South, or it is already because they have Harry and completed Moat Cilin + natural obstacle of Canal. Oh and I almost forgot about promised boons of the death that are still undiscovered... I mean come on.... Again, is there really anything to look forwards to? Unless author is just going to suddenly nerf mc out of nowhere, which would be equally stupid as story thus far, he can just apparate to every ruler in world and control them as he wishes -.- Also I do have to mention that writing isn't the best, which I could easily ignore if the story wasn't so bad already. And there's some other criticism I found from people that has gone further that me, which made me delete my original review and add this paragraph, there's really nothing to look forwards to and I'm stopping here. Very rarely I write review so early, but there's just so much stuff that inherently makes the story in future way worse so I feel justified doing so.
Man I must say this is one of THE best got/hp crossovers i've ever read. The only thing I'd like to ask is for a bit more frequent updates. Other than that I really enjoyed reading it till now[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
this is a aeosome got fanfic and its deserve a 5 star rating. ♤♤♤♤♤♤♤♤♤♤♤♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇◇♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧♧○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○.
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Thank you, you helped me figure out why webnovel was censoring my review for another novel. For that, I'm going to grandiously and pretentiously give said stars so I can reach the word count.
Found it by Chance. Read it a year ago. Sadly dropped but thanks for continuing it. .
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Man I finished it a long time ago. At that time I was GOT fanatic, and I somehow stumbled upon this fic. Read the whole lot of it within 24 hours, and tbh was disappointed when it was dropped. It's good that you're taking this up yourself. Takes a lot of courage. Hope you do justice to the original and please don't drop. Don't leave the work unfinished.