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For a warmer heart
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"His voice is... It's so deep...", Lina was immediately captivated by the richness of Romeo's voice when she first met him. Despite his guarded demeanor, which made him seem unapproachable and distant, Lina found herself inexplicably drawn to him. Determined to reach out to him, she persisted in her efforts to break through his exterior and bring him out of his darkness. Through her unwavering support and encouragement, she was finally able to see a glimmer of hope in Romeo's eyes and guide him towards a brighter future. A future filled with his warm smiles and joyous laughter. As she held his hand and made him gain that miraculous smile, she didn't hesitate to walk by his side until the end, and tell him from the bottom of her heart, that "His Voice Penetrated Her Heart."
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The story is okay but I can say that the writer can do more better than this. Keep going author waiting for more chapters. Best of luck. [img=recommend]
It's a good read. The writing quality could be done better but the story itself is good. keep going! :)
THIS IS A UNIQUE AND ENGAGING, ITS CHARACTER IS ALSO PERFECT, AND EVERYTHING IS GOOD EXCEPT FOR THE WRITING STYLE WHICH IS A BIT CONFUSING BUT ALL IN ALL THIS NOVEL HAS GREAT POTENTIAL
Its quite a unique story. A different setting with a new world building. The story is great as it walks slow from start but the paces keeps going sharp. Great story author. Keep it up Will carry out on.
The writing quality is a bit low but there is room for improvement. Other factors are very much better. continue the good work.
The plot is engaging, but I'm not too sure about the writing quality. The character design and depth is nigh perfect. The story has ample potential. Keep writing, author!
The writing wasn't clear at first but started getting pretty good after around 10 chapters. The interaction between the characters is lively engaging, with a variety of unique character designs. However, even though the novel is a female lead, I strongly believe that Romeo is the one leading the story. It's a bit confusing, but not a bad move. Not bad, can't wait to see how far you ca go...
I read it until the 10th chapter (get back to left some tips about the grammar). It's a nice story in the teen genre. I'm not familiar with this kind of genre that envolves around romance teens at school, however for the bits I read and for what I know, it has potential and was done in the right way. Point to improve: Grammar: I did have quite a bit of difficulty with the story immersion due to some mismatched tenses and verbiage issues throughout. All in all, keep the good work :)
I like the idea of the story, there are a few grammatical errors but nothing too noticable. Look forward to more chapters! Recommend for other readers to give a try
Haven't read a teen for long. The first paragraph was relateable for me. I hate when I have to leave vacation. Anyone looking for a good story this it. I laughed when that dude said to Lina, "I didn't think I was holding a sensitive part, it felt flat to me." Oh my! That was very funny. Author, please keep up the good work.
Well, I read till Chapter 12 and I honestly loved it. Loved the genre and everything. It talks about teen love, a topic most people don't take seriously here in Uganda. From what I read so far, I love it already. Good job dear. Keep going on