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What do you do when you are summoned to a filthy corrupted world and asked to vanquish the Chaos god. Only to be disposed of for no specific reason by the very entity that you were summoned by. However it doesn't end there. After surviving you must now get stronger and help the very being that betrayed you to save this world, so that you may go home and leave this treacherous planet...
Is what you want everyone to think.
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Authors Note: Hello. This is my first time writing a Webnovel, so I'm not very experienced. However, I'm hoping that with time I can improve both my writing and novel so that this may be a more delightful read.
I'm planning to make socials in the the future such as discord and what not.
Also the front cover isn't mine.
Alright bye.
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It has good potential the grammar is good not the best but it will improve more with experience. I can’t really say much about the plot because of the small amount of chapters but from what i read if it’s pulled off well it’ll be good. In my opinion you have to be more expressive in your writing unless you want the dreary feel of AoT but you’ll have to have characters that people are attached to die for me to feel depressed. I felt this was a really long 10 chapters but it’s probably because I was doing some light research on fighting styles of the weapons you picked. Ps: I know you probably won’t use this fighting style for the spear guy was his name Alex? But if you want to see a technique I found for Spear/Sword dual wielding search up Sword & Spear Dual Wielding by robinswords (it’s a YouTube shorts)
it is a very good story, the character development is marvelous and the action scenes are great. The magic system (and ichor) are unique and the system itself is cool. great potential so far, looking forward for more!
Hello, author here. The first couple of chapters are kinda slow. The pace becomes better at chapter 15. If you have a suggestion please leave a comment and if you enjoy I'd be grateful if you spare some powerstones. Thanks