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Dropped Officially, When reading expect Errors and Many expired memes. So you might cringe. No Ntr so I guess it's cool
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Viết đánh giá-Eroge god -first and only lemon in 89 chaper Net vse nahui blyat, osuchdau!Zaebali so svoey vodoi!
From ch 69 comment cause I'm lazy to write once more. "Wow that was trashy why she acting like that Lo 1? Based on her personality and upto how much you have shown of her this feels forced as f. well whatever already knew what kind of low life you are I already gave you feedbacks twice cause I liked the start and you said he wouldn't be be ta too which you contradict yourself two times by making m c act like a be ta mas oc hist yeah this is trash Lo I. all the wait and be ta mas oc ism and we get the s ex at ch 69 yet the woman who is mc going to have s ex with doesnt act like that lol now probably he is gonna make excuses it wasn't her and someone else realizing the mistake typical mongrel and yeah well all the bs m c holding power and sh it for fun and trash Lo I bro it would only be excused if your novel is good, well was good at the start but starts going more and more trashy and with how you keep streaching things"
It has potential, although I try to search the world mc is transmigrated and didn't find anything. I recommend the author to erase the Fanfic element which I only found is saitama on this novel, so it will be an original
I do have PTSD 😞 from academy/school type novels but this novel didn’t give me any probelms it was actually a great read Didnt trigger anything like that. The novel is something I enjoyed reading (call me a pervert but ur the pervert also for reading this 😙). I’m looking forward for each and every heroine arc. Inclusion (inclusion tf since when did I start writing so professional 🧑🏫) the novel is something I recommend u give a try.
Great potential for a novel as well having amazing update times. The downside is writing style is poor, mainly the constant us of bro, etc and Mc cocky attitude
I don't know why this story isn't being evaluated more but it's just a matter of time :P..... i recommend read TtTtTtTtTtTTtTTtTTtTTtTTtTTtTTtT
It has potential, the update are stable, the writing is good, it's just that mc doesn't use his power to clear some route that would cuck the prota
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WQ: 2 or 3 (I put 3) Author is either lazy or an illiterate barbarian. He writes everything like he's texting a friend. Constantly using 'bro' 'yall' ect... it doesn't fit and makes it seem like the author is an illiterate barbarian. SD: 4 Not much to complain about here. It's just how a normal story on wn progresses. CD: 3 or 4 (I'm leaning 3 but I'll put 4 because I'm being nice and there's not many chapters yet) So far they kind of feel like templates and conversation and development is ruined by the authors illiterate barbarian writing style because it seems like even though most characters he interacts with are supposed to be royalty they all speak like street hooligans. The conversation is also kind of dry, not completely soulless but not anything impressive. US: 5 Don't have any problems with it. not much to say. WB: 3 or 4 again I'll put 4 because I'm being nice. It's not a fanfic. don't know why it's in the fanfic section, it should be in the novel section. The world is kind of explained. It's just your average fantasy world with a demon king archetype that the heroes must defeat, just with modern technology.