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After all the things that he had done in his life, Alex realized that it was already his time to die.
But a sudden encounter with a weird person will turn his whole life around.
The formerly about-to-die teen shall now be a Traveler of different worlds!
"You are an Esper? Then come and taste my saber!"
"You are a Daoist? Then come and taste my fist!"
"You are a Genie? Well, can you grant me infinite wishes?"
Everyone shall witness Alex's rise on his endless journey!
Disclaimer: (((Don't make me credit to einlion. His novel, Endless Paths: Infinite Cosmos, from the reception of his readers, is obviously good, but its an accident that my title is similar to his. Really.)))
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truly one of the very few stories that got me hooked instantly , and now i can't wait for the next chapters to come out; i've always felt that the usual stories are petty restricted in the enviroment , systeme of developpement and so on, now THIS is real dimentional transfer, and i have that felling that **** just got real, and the plot is just about to start after this arc, can't wait. much love, best story so far (personal view)
One of the most interesting book i ve ever read. 3d characters,amazing plot , indepth world building, no youngmasters and cck suckin bitches and finally a cunning mc in flesh ,not like the ****tynovels who start with saying smart mc but being an ass later . The only thing i feel it lack is the character interaction between mc and the lover. Relationship is a give and take thingy. Until now i ve only seen mc giving and caring while alina being a ***** many times, maybe it will change. Overall its goddamn good!!!!
Good, but the MC sucks. Typical good MC that want to save people even if he may die (hero-complex). Can't even kill people just because they had a bad past or were influeced by others. Dont even want to sacrifice other people for himself, Im starting to get annoyed to all this 'good' annoying MC that don't even have a little of pride
Hello guys! I am the author of this novel! This is my second novel in this platform, and I feel fairly confident about my writing quality. So guys, feel free to enjoy this novel of mine!
I would say that the theme has potential since it's not one of the most used ones. In the beginning instead of meeting Truck-kun we met Storm-sama wich failed to do her work miserably and our mc was saved and teleported to a new world to participate in "quests". My first problem with this novel is the under-developed characters (we seem to get one more companion in each world he goes to, companions that I personally don't give a damn about, except Alina cuz she was the first and the main female protagonist, but under-developed nontheless). Second big problem is the fact that the start and ending of all 4 volumes that I read till now are pretty bad, instead of exploring the world with the protagonist we get 2-3 chapters in the POV of a random character wich we don't know nothing about and get some useless info dump, wich is pretty bad in my opinion I would prefer to see the protagonist view and not some random guy, while in the ending of a volume the protagonist doesn't have time to do anything after completing the main mission he and his companions are instantly teleported to another world, wich in my opinion is a big problem since we can't see any progression in the MC's relationship with his companions cuz they're always in the missions, a 1-2 days vacation after the main mission end would be really appreciated as we could use that time to digest some information about the world that the protagonist is about to leave and get some character development... The Fairy is a problem as well since she doesn't seem to like her work that much, fairies in novels usually have a mischievous personality, this one has one too, instead of giving the information that she needs to give as a Guide she always seems to be giving the information after it's useless or a during a situation that it can become usefull, wich is pretty annoying to me since it gets boring really fast and it's not really a good way to make character development. All that said I'm still enjoying the novel and will probably continue reading it for some time, might come back to change to review if I see it getting better or worse, really hope a few of these points change in the future. **: Since i'm not a native english speaker and it's been a while since I had to write a big text I would like to apologize to the readers for problems with past/present/future situations and other things. PS2: These are my opinions and as such no1 needs to take it at face value :P Ty for reading this if you did and Goodbye =)
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It seems that the author does not want bad reviews for his novel, he erases them all, that's why this trash novel has a lot of 5 stars, are bots
the MC is garbage, he acts like a complete doormat and has pretty much no solid personality to speak of, his so called "companions" are just a ****ty fairy that treats him like crap and like the slave he is, while dodging any consequences and in fact getting rewarded for being ****ty, and a "sidekick" that's constantly getting influenced by the fairy to also treat him like ****. neither of their actions ever seem consistent or coherent and the fact that we're basically forced to watch this wimpy MC getting used for labor gets really old really fast. ALSO, his supposed "guide" consistently hides or conceals information and useful things from him simply because she "can" or because she's scheming behind his back. of course, the MC can or wont do anything about this so whats the point in reading this novel about a worthless character no one cares about being abused by other worthless characters no one else cares about.
It's a quite good read. It's new with new thoughts and plot twists and turns. Signing out
loved the first novel because it was different and new and provided a fresh fun novel. this novel takes many of the best parts and is great just hope the first novel has less attention because of it
I find this novel enjoyable to read as the protagonist goes off to new adventures to gain power while finding ways to get stronger to complete his missions and defeating his enemies. It's has great genres for the story.
Its a very well written story, just not my thing. The female characters were just too... Cringey... And they were always so mean the the Male Lead... That stupid fairy is what made me eventually quit honestly.
It is truly an endless journey. so don't expect an ending. writing quality is good. story is hmmm All i can say is not interesting for me. world back ground(s) is somewhat restricted to a small area due to very short life of MC remaining and the annoying midget so No exploring.and my drop of this novel is mainly the annoying midget(May be you love it). all in all it is worth reading it.
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I kind get why this story has so little views even with the number of chapters. Listen man i get that you’re a newbie writer and i commend you for your work both for the writing style and the amount of chapters.,heck even the genre of world traveling is dope. But! I just started the novel and so i need to be hooked so what do you do? You introduce an extremely hateful and annoying character at the start. Then? You make the mc’s first enemy into his love interest... now i get that the second one is not necessarily bad heck even good if done right. But you just messed up her character and made it seem as if she is an ice queen then and extremely warm person then a sadist that likes to slap anyone who mentions her sister to her which is extremely ****ed to be honest as a normal human much less a man wouldn’t fucking stand by if someone slapped him for no reason but you made the mc not only not rebuke her but also just apologize to her and hug her to make her feel all better..... that made quite angry. Huff i don’t want to be too harsh to a budding writer since I understand that you’re doing you best and for that i commend you but i just shared with you what i felt from the first 40 chapters and so this would be extremely good feedback to you. I lost all desire to continue after he hugged her when she slapped him like who the **** does that? Anyway hope you all the best.
It's crap not sure why rating is so high... well i guess since author can delete bad reviews helps. It jumps from on thing to another too quick, mc stutters like a retard for no reason, anyway read if you iq is low you might like it.
MC seems like he is not the MC. Later on when the story develops, he turns into a huge sissy. The amount of novels i've dropped because of how the MC let people trample over him is insane. This novel is no different; it is a such a shame as the theme was really great as a newgame+ type. If only we had a #SissyMC tag.
Her uncle said he will help alina if she needs help vs the s rank intruder and nooow all of the sudden for drama, he cant help her cuz they can only help if the intruder is z. Which also makes no f sense cuz its not against other humans but f intruders who want to destroy humans like w t f. For reals are those authors even thinking, i understand some minor errors if its 100ts of chapters in but its chapter 16 and already massiv brainlagging author so frustrating cuz it happens like in every f novel. In new worlds like no world buildign at all, world trees couldnt think about solutions a human mc can come up with in a span of couple hours. how did this get 4,5 stars i will never understand rly 1 of th worst novels.
Great story I feel it has a lot of potential but if I had one problem with it is that it never feels serious to me. even when the MC and friends are in a dangerous situation it feels really light hearted and cheerful and I can’t take it seriously it’s a shame too cause there are some parts that have great impact but are just blown over by ether the gags or the bloody fairy it doesn’t help that there are entire chapters that consist purely with jokes this is more apparent in volume 2 when everyone has settled in
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There are quite a few... negatives, should we say, to this story. I'm not saying it's intrinsically bad but by stating you think the quality is there, you've opened up a can of worms. I think you've got a solid base but you need an editor and some quality time thinking over your work. I've only read the first chapter and I'm bothered by it's foundation. Most of your world background is going to come from the places your character travels to and as well, we don't have any background at first at all, even in the first chapter, on the world that the MC leaves behind. Your character design is too bland for my tastes. A character called Alex, the hero of heroes with a system, it seems too Mary Sue. At least you've made him younger, that gives him room to grow. I like that idea. The overall quality is a little subpar. I mean, it's 100 times better than most xinxia novels on this platform simply because the content is actually digestable but it could use some work. I'd suggest running over it and ironing out the kinks, for instance the constant use of the characters name. You can call him 'Alex' or use his last name, use the word boy, youth, teenager, or just not need to include his name at all. Your updates are regular, that's fantastic, I'll give you that. Overall, it's a solid novel but you have a rocky foundation. Whilst I haven't read past the first chapter, I can see the allure of the novel.
Alrighty, Before I start this amazing review I want to say I binged read this in like 5 days. Verrry Good book, one of the better ones on Webnovel to me anyway. Writing Quality - 4 The writing is fairly good, there are spelling mistakes here and there. Though, I can understand people make mistakes here and there. The mistakes aren't huge and you can easily figure out what the author was trying to say. The chapters are a perfect length, from what I can see they are thought through very well. Your storytelling is quite unique for some reason I fucking love the way you write. For example, the first world, to me was the best. Stability of Updates - 5 From what I can see, you have been uploading 1-2 chapters daily for around 3 months. I completely understand how hard it is to post daily, I tried at a time with my novel and was only able to post 1,500 words at the most each day. Though, it got very tiring after awhile. Story Development - 5 I'm not trying to make out that your book is a godsend, but it's quite good and deserves 5 stars for story development. The first volume was well described and very easy to understand. For me, I was easily able to follow the story of a traveler and the Esper's world as a whole. The second volume kept up with Alex exploring the world and finding new companions. No time throughout volume two was I confused, I just wanted to keep reading. Finally, Volume three. A fucking world filled with superhumans, who wouldn't want to keep reading. One of the greatest things that I enjoy about this book is the way it's set up. Alex goes to a new world each volume, meaning the author is able to create new exciting adventures without getting tired of one single world. Character Design - 4.5 The character Design in this book is quite good. Though me personally I dislike the way the fairy acts and how clueless and oblivious Alex is. Alex is starting to become less oblivious but he's still pretty clueless about his surroundings. World Background - 5 As I stated countless times throughout the review thus far, Moving around to different worlds is amazing. I'm enjoying the author's different worlds too much. Each of the world's that Alex goes to is well described before the volume starts. You may be confused at first but once the story develops more you go "Oh!" and understand everything that is going on. Ending (Overall 4.6) Overall, the book is fucking amazing. The author did a very good job of creating a complex and unique storyline. I don't understand why your book as so little reviews and or views. Not enough people are reading this masterpiece. P.S Author we are all waiting for Alex to get fucking laid. When is that going to happen?
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