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Amidst the normality of an ordinary and routine life, the Mc found himself living an ordinary life in a world that was anything but ordinary, The Dragon God World, The World of the Boobs Dragon, The World of Ecchi Anime Logic, The World of Boobs Power, The world of...DxD
Believing that his life would be normal as he did not present any type of “cheat”, the protagonist continued his life normally, until one day things changed.
"...Sigh, you've got to be kidding me"
That's what Mc said, in front of a mountainous red dragon
Standing and thinking for a moment, he couldn't help but wonder how things ended up like this so quickly
He looked at the dragon and at that moment, the dragon interpreting his silence as an answer, roared
"ROOOAAARRR!!!..."
"...Well, it could be worse"
If you're curious to know how things ended up like this, from an ordinary life to one full of supernatural problems, read on and find out
WARNInG 1: Slow pace, AU
WARNING 2: English is not my first language so there will probably be grammatical errors, plus it's my first story so don't expect too much and of course highschool dxd and other works used in this story belong to their respective authors
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Its a bad fic, and the mayority of 5-stars reviews is the same bot guy, it looks like and alt account of the author ngl---------------------
It's not bad but the biggest problem it has is its pacing. It is way too slow and basically nothing happens for the first 4 or 5 chapters.
The author wasn't kidding when they said the story was slow. The pacing is slow to the point that absolutely nothing is pushing the plot forward in the entire fifty-two chapters. Having to wait four plus months to get the same amount of chapters only for very little to happen, or even nothing is a bit much. If this was a completed story, there wouldn't be a problem because usually something decently big has to happen for the story end and regardless of how many boring chapters happen, the author HAS to push the story forward at some point to bring it to a close. This is not the case. While the story is interesting, it's not interesting enough. Add the slowness of the plot with the other issues, and you get a good story that turns sour due to bad decisions.
i like your story and i like the mc so far but it seems like u wrote the kind of mc that will get boring eventually i look to see how u keep the mc interesting , i also hope u make the harem unique , i tired of author just copy and pasting issei harem i like more variety . the only thing thankfully there isn't any character bashing , i cant take the fanfic author seriously if they decide to character bash.the only thing i I Don't like is how u treated issei character pls this didn't affect my review , i just dont like how u disregarded all of issei other character traits and just boiled his personality down to that of only being pervert and i like issei character and appreciate what the original author of dxd was trying to do
I'm liking the development of the story, it doesn't go very fast, the MC takes his time without rushing How the plot is going so far is excellent. It remains to be seen how it continues to develop.
The Novel is good but is too slow pacing ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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La historia parece interesante, pero tener solo 40 capitulos en medio año, asesina mi entusiasmo por leer la historia. Si la historia es de ritmo lento, al menos necesita más capitulos.
To start with the positives, this is extremely well written and has a good flow to it. It is very slow paced but it keeps moving along and is very enjoyable. The main negative to me is the MC, he just seems really underwhelming. He is a decent character and is well written but he doesn't feel like a MC for a DxD setting. He would be far better in something like Naruto, Marvel, Harry Potter, or DBZ. He just doesn't seem to belong to the setting despite being a decent character.
This is the best DXD fanfiction I have ever read, and that's crazy because theirs currently only around 30 chapters, please keep going author, and please never drop this series as it might be my last hope of ever reading a good DXD fanfiction in my whole life.
cool premise and plot but writing quality is really bad. you can spot here and there hownamateurish the writing is. dxd fics quality is always bad tho so this fic still one of the better one among it.
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this is the best dxd fanfic I've ever seen, and it currently (9/18/2024) only has 15 chapters.
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The true charm of slow-paced stories only reveals itself if you have at least a hundred chapters in hand. So I will wait for this moment. Good luck author.
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Author here to give five stars because obviously it's my work so don't expect me to be 100% sincere as I see no reason to be haha, anyway that's it👍