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When God created the world, He didn't plan for anything to be really Orange besides the Fruit... But hey! Even my God can't create everything so perfect, right?
Paint everything orange.......
Starting with the nobility of a certain Redhead...
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Viết đánh giáit is decent but the sentences are structured poorly, so it is hard to tell the difference between someone talking vs their thoughts and english doesn't seem to be their first language. some mistakes due to lack of research but overall not bad 1,3,2,2,3
From the synopsis it might seem stupid but I find it very interesting ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Tác giả William777
The writing is very strange, the chapters are short but the author releases them almost every day, and in them he still manages to give 'life'/'depth' to the characters, the story is very funny (a different point but good, but too much is boring), but it would be good to give a more serious focus to the work, especially like naruto's training/powers, which would be very interesting. There are some relevant holes in the story, but in itself it's not bad, but it leaves something to be desired, mainly because of the writing.